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Why do authors never respond to comments when the ideas they're trying to push forward are clearly trash and there's so many comments saying it's trash. Can we get a REASON why we need fan-on brainwash in this story ? It feels cheap . Disgusting . And I don't think there's a reason for it .
Ace looked the pathetic noble dead in the eye before marking him with his Conqueror's Haki. Ace used the Domination aspect of Conqueror's Haki to overpower Outlook III's spirit. Outlook III instantly lost his will to defy Ace.
One Piece: Emperor of the Seas
Anime & Comics · Ehnvy
I'd have preffered an emotionless system like in most of these novels. The MC is disgusting and he takes too many liberties.
ch 10 Chapter 10: Unprovoked Attack
Harry Potter Live Question In 1976
Movies · ZoroTraineeWriter
I dislike the MC greatly so far. He doesn't want to integrate , interact or breathe the same air as anyone else with the stated reason he's a "grown-up". What nonsense. Also, I read in synopsys that it's a unique novel but then he wants to: abuse the room of requirment(like all other FF), doesn't like mind-reading(like all other FF), keeps vital info secret for weird reasons °doesn't have a fallback plan°(like all other FF), despises wands and wants to learn wandless(like most other FF), has knowledge of a bunch of "studies" why everyone else does stupid things(like a lot of othet FF), he's "rational" °makes a bunch of selfish plans°(like most other FF). Overall, a lie and an unlikable MC. dropped
This book has been deleted.
I'm dropping here, that "wormhole" ability he got through plot armor is completely tasteless and it damaged the integrity of the story. Paired up with previous complaints I've had about the MC's plot-derived power-ups like randomly changing your race.. yeah, goodbye .
ch 63 Toxic Solutions, Unfortunate Situations, Home
The Odd Shaman (Read A/N for further info)
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Ah, I thought it's going to be a somewhat nice story. But it seems ,like 98% of Chinese trash, this one also suffers from either "brainwash issues" , laws issues" , "immortality issued", "golden finger issues".
"Ding~ Yes, and after the Host evolves their Devil Fruit, the Devil Fruit user will become the host's diehard loyalist!"
One Piece: Build The Strongest Beast Pirates
Anime & Comics · 0StolenDream0
This whole "separating" identities just shows the author knows it's completely stupid to go murderhobo, especially killing incapacitated, defenseless people. But like all the other idiots out there, they have the opinion that if you just SNAP the Joker's neck, the world will be a better place. What society needs is a beacon of safety, not a serial killer with unique ideas. What a letdown, a good fic ruined by stupidity.
ch 17 Chapter 17: Recruiting Emma Frost
Marvel: The Death Surgeon
Movies · Charizard6
Ethical lines only matter in 1 chapter for the author to make drama randomly. A few chapters down the line he'll do whatever again because author has no plan and no boundaries , don't take it to heart, it's a 3-rd rate novel at best.
"This is my last warning, the only reason you didn't die today is because you spared those soldiers and didn't go on a killing spree, but if something like this happens again I won't spare you." Superman said as he disappeared.
The Marvelous Superman
Others · Passerby_Venne
The most completely disgusting part is not the plot hole situation, but he gave his father superpowers withlut consent. What "close your eyes", he's totally treating them like toys.
Kevin just ignored him and continued "Dad I have something important to give you. Close your eyes for a sec." and as Fanlien #1 closed his eyes he felt his son come close and slightly touch his neck, and then he felt a sting.
The Marvelous Superman
Others · Passerby_Venne
Ah, this feels like the author is trying extremely hard to make a "ruthless MC" for the webnovel lowlives who can't read anything if it's not in the style of "you look at me ,I beat you up ; you swear at me, I kill your entire family". Complete trash , I'm dropping .
"Well ... Thanos was influenced by Death when he was young. That won't happen to me. The ruthlessness will be balanced out by the righteousness of Bruce Wayne and give me good balance there. Just like Rick is chaotic and Azmuth is rather good. It would be balanced, but allow me to be ruthless and kill when it is necessary.", I explain.
Different Batman
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
Not rituals again . The last FF I read, the MC gave himself feline eyes in his 3rd year for night vision using rituals, then proceeded to do more rituals to boost his "magic reserves". The pre-previous FF I read , also had some rituals. Basically, rituals are average author's way of bulldozing through powerscale and create the invincible 15-year-old magical prodigy that can fight 5 Voldemorts at the same time .
Though Astronomy had some other advantages that were considerable enough to catch our protagonist's interest, the meaning and power the astral bodies possessed opened the door to another field of magic he was rather passionate about; and no, it's neither transfiguration nor charms.
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
Oh god , the first class is already a Goblin Rebellion ?
I know, it's boring. I expected my first lesson in Hogwarts to be a highly esoteric, complex and fascinating class like charms or transfiguration, not an unimaginably mind-numbing lecture on goblin rebellions.
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
What do you mean by "until he's safe" ? Because , from what I know , the world gets progressively more dangerous the more years into the HP books it goes. If he's acting like a lunatic on coke thinking about how to backstab people at the start of book one, we'll never reach the point where he'll be "safe" till the end of the fanfiction . The start of book one is literally sunshines and magic and there are only 2 mildly dangerous events with predefined locations in the entire school year. If you're not in that bathroom during Halloween and you're not entering the forbidden room on floor 3 at the end of the school year, there's literally no danger .
On another note, the two of them were from very influential families. Susan's aunt was Amelia Bones herself, one of the toughest cookies in magical Britain and current head of the DMLE. She's also unofficially the only reason this country survived the political Ragnarok that was Minister Fudge's mandate. The Abbot family was a house of purebloods with a seat in the Wizengamot, less impressive but influential nonetheless. Having a good relationship with these two could come in handy in the future, I guess I'll have to use my charm…pun non-intended.
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
Who is Mark ? He is a researcher at an observatory studying Mars samples . Where is he ? Looks like New York, do you want a postal code ? He just came out of a colorful hole in reality . Such negativity halfway down the first chapter tsk .
Even if he had mysteriously been transported to another place due to some bullshit reason, as long as he could find the some embassy, he could still get back to the base without much problem.
Spider-Verse: Another Spider-Man
Anime & Comics · Baph0met
The premise of this novel is interesting , but unfortunately, it's plagued by disgusting cliches. He's poor, his father died because they're poor, his mother had a stroke , the guilds he joins betray him , the women he's interested in only use him for benefits, he has an undying friend who he will help unwaveringly , his other friends distance and betray him , he's swearing up and down that he will "repay" all the wrongdoing that haven't happened yet , the rich are ostracized and emotionless, the world is run by benefits and backstabbing .There's a FL who's rich and plays the game to prove XX to herself and the MC has mentioned it like 5 times already. At least there's no little sister to take care of ? BLEH ! I only want to read the MMORPG , I don't need all these "conflicts" from MCs TRAGIC FUTURE LIFE .I really, don't care one whit. Just, finish it and let me read the MMORPG part. Ugh, almost dropping already .
ch 15 Leonel
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
Riight , of course the so-called system aka DEUS EX MACHINA is not only going to give him insights into how to create world-altering technology, but also hand in raw power to make him a universe-level godking in 20 chapters. Do these authors lack imagination or are all these novels made by AI ? It was great to read about a scientist developing stuff in One Piece, but now we're back to the cliche where he'll beat everyone with completely out of the hat powers that noone expects because they're undeserved. Way to ruin my enjoyment with this stupid development. DROPPED
ch 21 Chapter 21: Check-in
Fourth Calamity of the Beasts Pirates
Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
I'm confused. Magic this, demonic power that, shapeshifting, manipulation , Whatever. This is Dragon Ball , why is the MC(author) ignoring Ki and martial arts ?
ch 0 6 First Kill
Dr Blush (Dragon Ball Fanfic)
Anime & Comics · dancematdan