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Is Skia male or female wolf thing? There are both descriptors of him and her mentioned.

How did he control the iron sand and turn it into chains? Did he unlock a bloodline of a Kazekage? Somehow copy Magneto's power? Telekinesis?

He keeps saying he doesn't know how he got powers, but the voice clearly asked for his wishes and explained what was granted. Also, titanium is a terrible material for blades. I think it can't retain an edge or something. Maybe an alloy is better.

This novel started sounding like a translated Chinese novel some time during mission impossible and never got better. Then there is the wrench. Why does mechanic have a legendary artifact and the other jobs don't?

This needs to be edited from chapter 1 to this one. There are spelling errors every 2-3 sentences like felt is always spelled flet and others. Words are substituted wrongly, like instead of compartment, apartment is used and so many more errors that it makes it hard to read.

3 weeks are 21 days, plus the 5 tries before that it equals 26 exp. Points for the skill. Not 35 that ot has. That is an entire week an 2 days more.

You know there are such things as notaries that verify if a document is officially signed? Something this big needs one or he could have just forged the whole thing. He could bribe one, but he still needs it.

Insane characters are best portrayed as mad scientist or mastermind manipulating from the dark. And the most fun ones are super elaborate and complex plans for achieving mundane tasks. Like inventing time travel because you forgot to watch or record your favorite show or go to Woodstock or something.

Are there going to be flashback chapters of Harry dealing with the time travelers he was warned about by Iliyana Rasputin? Maybe meeting her and pranking her, then teaching her? And a true end to the story like after 10 000 years we look on how he spends one of his days?

I always wondered if Greed Island can be played again after finishing it for the first time? Also, there are a lot of treasures in the game, so if it can be played again, what stops someone from visiting the game every 20 years to eat 20 pills and live forever?

There wasn't mention of the slow fruit, door fruit or gravity fruits? On the other thing I agree MC needs to choose balance, but does that mean the Saber eats dark and light fruit? Maybe there is other that balances the dark? Or maybe the balance is that the Saber eats one and MC another?

Didn't she say the absorbed energy is deposited in the surrounding hill? So, what happens when the amount of energy that can destroy a continent is dumped in the hill around her?

Are the animated series considered cannon in this Star Wars? Because there is a lot of story in between the movies and a lot to do if they were cannon. Better go for the 3rd movie, mess with order 66 and possibly start pretending he is a force user with force blank like Palpatine.

A character idea. For Nen he gets Specialist like Pakunoda with Zoldick training for the stealth and infiltration techniques. Cost 10 13 or 19 depending on talent chosen. For Haki he gets focus on observation, shapeshifting devil fruit like Bon Clay and Rokushiki for movement techniques. Cost 10 13 or 19 depending on talent. Force he gets light and dark without personality change, clairvoyance and force stealth. The rest he gets the hard way in the world. Cost 8 11 or 17 points based on talent chosen. In MCU classes combine to make a shapeshifting, memory reading/changing thief/spy/infiltrator good at infiltration and exfiltration.