ok, the first chapter got me hooked. again.
ch 0 1 Clingy ex-girlfriend crashes the date
Fantasy 路 Norah_Koch
Honestly I kind of feel bad for Nia. I mean is true that she's hurting a lot of people ; she is not greedy for power and only wants to be free from this disgusting situation. Let's be honest here, he is not just a brother but a twin馃あ. I might have done, the same if i were in her place. She doesn't even has the freedom to love and above that, Aku is possessive. And if Nia were to be honest with him about her feelings, I believe she would have been chained by now and would be assaulted again and again.
ch 60 Burning Resolve
Fantasy 路 sola_cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 109 The King's Mourning
Fantasy 路 schreient
I'm only at chapter 8 but, I couldn't stop myself from reviewing this boook. 1. Writing is good. I won't say excellent because it doesn't pass that category. But it doesn't you are not gonna get better at it. You can do really well with few more writings. 2. I love how you created a such a different FL. I mean whenever you read a story, FL is always beautiful extra ordinary nd if she is hated, she is still beautiful this and that. And if it's a obese FL, she always looses weight and becomes a very attractive woman who's followed by every hot/popular guy in the town / world or whatever. But the FL in this story is very beautiful, at least this is what I think. She doesn't not have a perfect body but u described her characteristics. She has a sweet , soft and loving voice . She is caring and hard working, kind and respectful. And lastly she's not a busybody. I haven't finished the whole book so I can't say anything more. I hope that i was able to express my feelings thorough this.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen 路 Michelle_Sosa