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JRP
male LV 2Author of "The King of Spades"
2019-05-07 Joined PhilippinesBadges 5
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He read a lot of training books in order to train himself so of course he'd know the terms
{Without proper balance, weight distribution, and limb-eye coordination, running at full speed here is impossi-}
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No problem, thank you for Reading!
"You talk like losing to me is the biggest disgrace in your life. Who the fuck do you think you're talking to?"
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Thank you so much for the Feedback! I've actually written a long paragraph to answer however, it seems that it wasn't sent so let me repeat it. You are mostly spot on with your observations. Jericho actually has a hidden agenda on why he was so eager to hear out Kendrick and the others after seeing that the nuns weren't seriously injured. (Note: it is an extremally childish reason and the current Jericho isn't even conscious of it) As for his relationship with Darius, there are 3 main reasons. 1. Darius is the son of one of the most powerful men in the world. For a cool-headed 5-year-old orphan with no background (Except the monster of a head nun), he knows that continuously antagonizing Darius would just be stupid at this point. 2. He felt SLIGHTLY guilty about bashing Darius' face in even though the fight was over. (He tries sugarcoating it by saying that it was for Fred, even though we all know that it was just because he couldn't control himself in time) 3. After their talk at the hospital, he found out that Darius wasn't TRULY bad, just a bit broken. This is why he calmed down. (If the fight happened when they were adults though, I don't think Darius would be able to walk again)
"You talk like losing to me is the biggest disgrace in your life. Who the fuck do you think you're talking to?"
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If your wondering how they managed to grow fully adult trees in a few months... remember the nun from the orphanage who can accelerate plant growth? I never stated that a gift is unique to a person. Heck most adults have Physical Enhancement.
"How do you guys like the trees that we spent months of painstaking labor to grow just so you can always get fresh oxygen throughout your time here?" (Philip)
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Gifts like fireball where you need to activate them to use. Physical Enhancement is a passive type since it is always on
"In this area, the use of activation needed gifts is greatly prohibited. Not only is there a chance you'll damage the trees, but it would also negate the purpose of the entire area. So, if we see you using them, then please be warned of the consequences you'll have to bear."
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12-20-22 Guys author here, for those who are currently reading, I've changed the timeline from 2012 to 2017. I wanted to add more modernity to the novel in the future which is why I decided on the change. sorry for being so indecisive :(
ch 29 First Day
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that will be be further explained in the future chapters
ch 0 2 Two Months Later [Edited]
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I know right? But it's hard trying to have Fred act younger when he's constantly sorrounded by mature people. at this point, him acting mature because his adapting to them would be more believable anyway... THANKS FOR READING THE CHAPTER!
ch 28 Lackey!?
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Thank you for the support!!
ch 0 1 Beginning [Edited]
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The most OP gift of all
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Ye i noticed it too. this is my first novel so I don't know how to adjust their tones just yet (I think it got better in the further chaps) However, most of the kids here are much more mature for their age because of their past. (mentioned in future chapters)
"You M*therF**ker!! What the hell is in that wrap!"
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in the future, they're still kids right now but I already have an idea on who I want as the FML
I know that some of you will be thinking that this doesn't really fit his "earn a family" personality, but don't worry, I plan to explain the reason a couple of chapters from now
Deciding to trust this feeling, he steeled himself and started preparing his belongings. He packed his clothes and favorite blanket together with his favorite book. He will go to that organization and learn as much as he can.
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I was trying to portray them as very mature because of their tragic pasts but it seems like I overdid it. thanks for the feedback!
ch 14 Decision (2)
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I actually took the measurements from google, so it's not right? thanks for the feedback!
ch 0 4 Improvement
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I'm sorry for not updatingggg. The truth is I'm sadly going to stop updating in Webnovel. As for the reason you can actually read it in the synopsis above. But do know that the fact you showed interest to my story is a REALLY big deal for me, Thank you so Much for supporting "The KING OF SPADES!!"
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