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Well I guess the author doesn't like Sarah coz it seems like he's destroying her character on purpose.I don't really mind but if he's doing all this just to make Jake end up with ruby again I'll be very disappointed

Glad you're back

Author will they be healed of all the injuries sustained in the ordeal once it is over coz some of these injuries seem pretty brital.

I really like Sarah I think she's a good character, she depth and will get more development, unlike other novels with pure innocent girls that know nothing about sexuality coz those kind of girls barely exist in real life and don't say she doesn't deserve Jake or stuff like that, everyone has their flaws. I personally think she should end up with Jake based on what I've seen from the rest of the female characters, don't really know much about Ruby we've only seen her like thrice, but then again it's the author's novel not mine.

I understand but let's be honest, we've only seen Ruby once and Sarah's been with him longer and he only See's Ruby as a friend so it actually makes more sense,but I like them both so it doesn't really matter to me.

Thanks for the chapter author. Also how long will the second ordeal be, you said before that it will be shorter than the first but it doesn't seem likely anymore

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update

Thanks

Thanks

Good chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Btw thanks for the chapter author

Why are people disrespecting the author, even if it did not end the way I expected I was still pleasantly surprised which is good, and besides it's just one chapter I don't expect every single chapter to be to be 💯 the author is human too.

Yeah I like the change of pov's

I feel you bro we do not want another vampire system I dropped that novel in the first 20 chapters