Jackrabbit_Gee

1yr

Posted

basically just bad pacing, I think. I mean it's... fine? there's nothing really wrong with it per se. I think my biggest problem with this story is that in order to really understand what's going on you have to be familiar with Wuxia novels. this is fine as the Target Audience is obviously people on WebNovel. the Problem is the Author feels the need to take several pages to explain things we should already be able to figure out. For example, A very intense scene with a man BLEADING OUT ON THE FLOOR is just pushed to the side while two people just like, talk? and stare angrily while reminiscing?? So yeah, flow of the story is really odd in certain places and the pacing is off.

Unrivaled Medicine God

Eastern · Feng Yise

Jackrabbit_Gee

1yr

Posted

the MC is basically... not a person? has no motivation, randomly goes to where The Plot is happening, and the story just feels cheap? like I could not care any less about any of the characters, they all just feel super flat

I Got Stronger By Using Copper Coins Until I Am Invincible

Eastern · White Foxes Are Not White

Jackrabbit_Gee

2yr

Posted

The writing is so bad that after reading the entire first chapter, I still have no idea what's supposed to be happening... idk if it's just a terrible translation or if it's actually poorly written...

FairyTail Passive Invincibility

Anime & Comics · JarroLightfeather

Jackrabbit_Gee

3yr

Commented

oh so THAT'S how babies are made

After hearing what was said, the dejected grey rat perked up and immediately answered, "Yes, that's true. His looks are, as you humans say, devastatingly handsome. Any woman that meets his gaze would be pregnant immediately, any female spirit that catches his eye would want to reincarnate immediately…"

Seized by the System

Sci-fi · Mu Heng

Jackrabbit_Gee

3yr

Commented

the amount of exposition is kinda ridiculous lol. "oh senior, what is our master plan? [5 pages later] oh yeah. I remember now, thanks. I sure hope no one heard that..."

ch 57 It’s a Cultivation Race!

Seized by the System

Sci-fi · Mu Heng

Jackrabbit_Gee

3yr

Commented

jeez author sucks at pronouns

And next to her was Rin, her childhood friend, her teammate, her first and only love ... and the girl whose death triggered all the events we saw in Naruto

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Meralman

Jackrabbit_Gee

3yr

Commented

I dont understand why he is so angry. He seemed to be a standard Otaku and got to fulfill every Otakus DREAM. Getting superpowers and living in a fantasy world. I mean sure he was told WHY he had those powers but still I would be very grateful in his position

I'll ruin your fucking miserable filthy life!!!!!!!!