skysworn

2yr

Replied to Nuubier

I've read both of those (maybe haven't finished Reverend insanity yet). Do you know any other novels with the same quality?

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

skysworn

2yr

Replied to RVN_1998

Interesting 🤔. Is this a literary term that's just rarely used, or is it something you kind of made yourself? (I'm curious because I've never read it said like that before)

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The Rise of the Black Plain

Fantasy · RVN_1998

skysworn

2yr

Replied to wajoli_zako

Yeah, it'd be better if they were all mental thoughts

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The Rise of the Black Plain

Fantasy · RVN_1998

skysworn

3yr

Commented

uh oh... it just went from past tense to present tense...

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The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

skysworn

3yr

Replied to Lucca_Wenner

I would probably die, but if I survived, I wouldn't work like a servant to a condescending emperor. I would take a vacation.

"I cannot understand, I'm not a father," Leon closed his eyes. " The lives of a few criminals won't solve anything; in that case, make them taste your pain without causing a war. Demand that the Allied Forces of the North-America deport those criminals, you can keep them as your prisoners to torment them as long as you want."

Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)

Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99

skysworn

3yr

Replied to BlackBulp

You're completely right about how killing the dragon early would make the story pretty bland, so I can't disagree. Though it already seemed to get sorta bland due to how powerful he already is. (I assume that was fixed later on in the story) However, I still think that he could have considered more options before signing himself away to defeating all of the dungeons in Japan. That's gotta take a heck of a lot of time too. (I might be wrong about how long it would take since I stopped, but it still seems like a whole lot of effort for nothing). The information part does make some sense, but I still don't think it warrants all of his effort to gain the emperor's trust. In conclusion, I think I'm just pretty irritated by the MC's personality. Again with the company concept, I feel like he's doing a lot of this in vain and he went to the conclusion that he NEEDED the emperor too early and quickly.

Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)

Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99

skysworn

3yr

Replied to Xelarim

Humans from before cameras were a thing?

And this wretched scene was also being transmitted live to the young master through holographic video.

Worlds' Apocalypse Online

Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress

skysworn

3yr

Commented

This sounds suspiciously like s*x...

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Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

skysworn

3yr

Commented

Awesome, but I think that the paragraph where you had the character explain that the guaranteed breakthrough was a bit long winded. (Just an opinion)

ch 19 Dark shadow eagle

Monster Cultivation Supply Shop

Fantasy · xxAsura

skysworn

3yr

Posted

I try to be impartial about reviews, but I just love this book so much! 1. Pretty Smart MC 2. Science concepts that may or may not be real... (either the author really loves and knows science and math that much, or they are really good at BSing. 3. No crowds of retarded arrogant people throwing themselves at the MC 4.Masterpiece