I think to this point your writing has been really good. I just feel apprehensive for the harem. Maybe it would be even better if you didn't even go into the direction of harem, maybe just choose one girl. Because harem can literally destroy amazing stories. At least that is how I feel about. Because for now you still have the chance to not go to the harem direction.
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I think to this point your writing has been really good. I just feel apprehensive for the harem. Maybe it would be even better if you didn't even go into the direction of harem, maybe just choose one girl. Because harem can literally destroy amazing stories. At least that is how I feel about. Because for now you still have the chance to not go to the harem direction.
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