Badges 5
Moments 5
Hu liena , all villain heroines
ch 0 -1 Lucifer's Harem
In Dauluo Dalu as Lucifer dropped
Anime & Comics · Amon_rroe
you did a good job author ,not great . characters development always welcome but you should do more conversation than this ,it's getting boring just with thought and explanation . the only decent conversation is between mc and the monkey . anyway your fanfic isn't that bad .
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[Re written] Read Douluo Dalu: The Sovereign of Technology
Anime & Comics · Aeolius
next please
ch 0 8 Chapter 8 : One-Tails energy
Walk around Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System
Anime & Comics · Madara_Uchiha_68
well i dunno which i want to vote , Naruto Universe already have many good chara , some OC enemies might be nice but don't make them outshine the cannon one i think ? so male/female OC is good i think .
ch 23 The Tiger or the Goat?
Naruto: Reborn With Useless Skills?
Anime & Comics · LuminouShadow
sigh , i don't care about aang but it's definitely unnecessary to be best friend to him all of sudden , and don't forget the MC in your story is always zan , not aang not sokka and definitely not zuko . Fanfic is to re-make the orignal to make your story unique not follow the original ,so yeah dissapointed
ch 16 Team Girl Power + Zan 7
A Blazing Fist (Gamer Insert - Starting in Avatar The Last Airbender)
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0