Webnovel Author: tsukareta - Novel Collection

Good book with a good range of vocabulary to describe the scenes and thoughts of the characters. The plot seems interesting and I hope the author doesn’t drop it. [img=recommend]

This book has an interesting regressor theme, but overall the book needs a lot of refining and cleaning up with the English. However, it is still pretty understandable. So far, the book has potential, but only time can tell.

The writing quality is really good compared to the vast majority of novels in Webnovel. Although, I’ve still found grammatical and some punctuation mistakes. However, the story development is very interesting as it takes on two perspectives within the story. The plot is very refreshing compared to the dark or action genre novels that take up a lot of concentration. This makes the novel very relaxing to read; along with descriptive imagery that can help readers visualise every scene. Chapters have also been released daily, but there aren’t enough chapters to comment on the consistency. It would be best to use an editing website like Grammarly or ask someone to edit; since it might be hard for the author to spot their own mistakes. Regardless, good luck writing the rest of the book!

The writing quality is honestly amazing and is definitely above average. Everything is very descriptive to ensure a greater, visual experience for readers, which is nice. The plot seems interesting and diverse as well, because it incorporates different gods from around the world as well as the author’s own ones. So far, the stability of updates is steady, but it is too early to make too many comments on it. However, there are still some errors that I found, while reading through the book. This includes grammatical errors (e.g. tenses, some unsuitable use of words and accidental, extra spaces) and punctuation mistakes (e.g. missing/unnecessary commas and full stops as well as capitalisation errors). Just as a reminder, don’t worry too much as there’s just some and everyone makes mistakes. Good luck on writing the rest of your book!

So far, the stability of updates seem to be very consistent, which is good. The writing quality is also decent and quite descriptive, but there are still quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. Of course, English is not the author's first language, but I would like to remind the author to stick with one tense as I saw it switch sometimes by accident. Other than that, the story development as well as the world background has been paced and portrayed well. The book is short right now, but has a lot of potential. I advise that the author thinks of maybe another objective for the MC as well, since I don't think the MC will be correcting his mistakes as the king the whole time? For instance, will he explore the origin of the system or maybe after he fixes the kingdom; he will explore the world or even conquer it? Anyways, good job to the author and good luck continuing the book! [img=recommend]