jaro_onody

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jaro_onody
jaro_onody
1 months ago
Posted

finaly a good system story keep it upp ...............................................................................................................................

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jaro_onody
jaro_onody
1 months ago
Posted

confusing story , started very wel then after chap 2 its just goes down. translation is med................................................................

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
6 months ago
Posted

very interesting concept . the only thing i dont like is the mc personalty , you didt need to make him a cry baby and so awkward ...............................................

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
6 months ago
Posted

the story itself feels like its been made by ai or translited by one . probably both . calling the same moves by different name like sonido or flash step that someting tipical for ai . skill that are masterd are sometims shown as ultimate ten 5ch later that same skill is proficient. story itself is kind off mid , doesn't have any high points . just a op mc that follows the plot . anyway the auhtor doesn't read his translation or edited them

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
7 months ago
Commented

how he mastered all kiddo under 80 like was mentiont in past chapters it was letterly system reward

Kyōraku Callum was genuinely surprised by Seinosuke Yamada's choice. If Kyōraku Callum had a weakness, it was Kidō. Yamada's avoidance of a Kidō duel suggested a surprising confidence in his other abilities.

Bleach and One Piece: Time-Space Zanpakutō

Bleach and One Piece: Time-Space Zanpakutō

Anime & Comics · kane45

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
8 months ago
Commented

this doest make sens

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
9 months ago
Posted

feels like ai no personalty at al translation is 4 star very good, but the story is beyond mid........................................................

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
9 months ago
Commented

i see what you did here indeed

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
9 months ago
Commented

wait ist great darkness just a title given to lucifer

The Great Darkness, the source and embodiment of all darkness in the Multiverse, had existed since the dawn of the Omniverse, born alongside The Presence. It had since receded into silence, dormant for ages. Though its essence had surfaced in many forms across history, it now remained still—unaware of the new arrival, lost in something akin to slumber.

The End in DC/MCU

The End in DC/MCU

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

jaro_onody
jaro_onody
1 years ago
Posted

what i really deslike in chinees fics is that they are trying to reinvent things like how chakra works or how genjutsu works. l like come on we all watched the same show you dont need to change the mechanics or its laws