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U mean nose not ears

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nice pun man

That along with his Knight vision that allowed him even greater vision, perception, and sensing powers than eyes of sin, that was all that Alex had so far discovered about his new demon powers. 

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

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it's Jason I'll tell the author about the mistake thank u for bringing this 2 light

"Hey! Kid! Did you hear that? Your friend also fucked up just like you! Now we also have to teach him a lesson and show him who he is messing with! You can finally make yourself more useful to us! Who knows, maybe if you do well you might get promoted from slave to member!" Jayson said with an eerie yet bright smile, putting his hands on Ray's shoulder, making him shudder as goosebumps ravaged throughout his entire body. 

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The Great Demon System

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yo man its me again after so long I think u meant his time

In his heart, he knew that this time would come but he wished that it would have come much later than sooner… 

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The Great Demon System

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boy it works bassically the same he gives the system crystals and then the system crafts it

After Jayden finished testing out her equipment, they both decided to head to the arena where they saw Abby still hard at work practicing her scythe skills, heavy sweat running down her face. 

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The Great Demon System

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yo man its me again it's "than" not "that"

As Travis slowly and reluctantly turned around to face where that horrible feeling was coming from, he saw the face of a pure demon, a wide grin plastered on his face, his purple eyes staring deep into his soul with immense pressure coming his way, making him even more scared that before as his legs melted into jelly, falling right on his ass, trying his best not to piss his pants. 

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The Great Demon System

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yo man it me again u made a mistake in grammar here

Moby let out a big sigh of disappointment seeing the sight before him as he knew that he had to change their perspectives eventually… but now was not eventually and he had other, more important things to do.

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The Great Demon System

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yo drip it's me again the word from should be for

'Th-thank you so much for your words of kindness… Words could not express how happy I am... I am so glad that you are my lord… I am so glad I met you… You are the shining hope in my life… Every time I am down, insecure, or doubting myself, no matter how many times I do it, there you always are to prove me wrong and cheer me up… if it weren't for you I would have been long dead by now… I promise I will work harder and serve you even better from now on! I will try my best to think more positively, keep my head up high, and think of a better future… This will be the first time I truly disagree with you, my lord… Your words are truly inspiring and heartwarming beyond what you could even imagine…' Abby said, trying her best to hold in a waterfall of tears from breaking out and overflowing through the dam known as her eyes as she felt so much better knowing that despite all her failures and constant sobbing, her lord still cared deeply for her and didn't want to abandon her because he liked her for who she was, not from her strength and achievements like everyone else in her life.

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The Great Demon System

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@drip me again u wrote the word 'for' before times the word doesn't fit

The only problem was that they were 10s if not 100s for times more expensive. Moby began scrolling up and down at all the new abilities trying his best to find a good one with Abby and Jayden in the back trying their best to give him advice.

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The Great Demon System

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@drip dear author it's me again in this paragraph u wrote 'on' instead of 'of'

"Heh… Good thing that such a situation that will never ever happen right?" Moby said, rubbing the back on his head making Jayden chuckle before proceeding to explain to her and Abby everything that had transpired, making Jayden slightly annoyed at her father for injuring Moby and Abby praising him for his strategies and unbreakable resolve like usual.

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The Great Demon System

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np if u want I can check previous chapters and future chapters also I love the story and amino is a great place to get art u can get coins quick and for 100 coins u can get some amazing art

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@drip dear author u wrote Jayden by kistake

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yes u r good job man

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first

ch 341 Monster Transmutation System Upgraded

MMORPG: Divine Monster Transmuter

MMORPG: Divine Monster Transmuter

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