Titanium_Turtle17

1mth

Commented

The pichu can talk now??? lol

"This is the public waters of the Sea Clan, even the shameless human robbers of the Desert are afraid of the Sea Clan while trying to take a detour to go home." Guoguo said, "I can understand their language. I know that their ship is pretending to be a commercial vessel. The symbols on it and the emblem on the hull that represent commercial identity are all forged."

Boiling Beast Bloodline

Eastern · Jing Guan

Titanium_Turtle17

4mth

Commented

Jason calls him "Mark" not Wolf.

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Ethereal World Online

Games · Malignant

Titanium_Turtle17

11mth

Posted

For me the Story has a nice flow. It is not to fast or to slow. It has a nice description of character ability and attitude, but need a little more information on looks. I would love to get a chance to read more of the story and dig deeper into the story's world setting.

Cultivation: I Can Add Descriptors To My Body

Eastern · Heartless

Titanium_Turtle17

11mth

Posted

This Novel has a blunt world entry, but besides that it is a steady time and detail flow. I happen to love the different take on the cashback system going towards knowledge. Some of the character names a very similar in English, yet there details and emotion allow for just enough diversity. I would love to continue reading your work in the future. good luck.

Starting As A Top Student, I Get Back 100 Times The Knowledge I Teach

Urban · University Top Student

Titanium_Turtle17

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

ch 68 Dual-Mastery basic foundation

God´s Eyes

Urban · HideousGrain

Titanium_Turtle17

1yr

Posted

I really like the way the story flows, but with some grammar errors and missing background information, it slows down the process of creating a world to fall into. Also the process of enhancement is not fully defined in the beginning.

Divine Beast Lord: 10000 Amplifier From The Start

Fantasy · summertime

Titanium_Turtle17

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Titanium_Turtle17

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 42 Luo Family

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Titanium_Turtle17

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Immortal Body, Exquisite Nine Orifices Sword Heart

Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws

Eastern · Carefree Smile

Titanium_Turtle17

3yr

Posted

This story has great build up, progression, and design. One of the best character developments and transitions based stories, I have read in a long time.