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  • Discovering evil

    Discovering evil

    Fantasy

    "Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared. "You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in. "Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger." Magic is real. There's a whole world of it. Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn... On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.

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Shiksha_Jerath: The story is only thirteen chapters in when am reviewing it, so not much to go on but it's a promising start.
I would recommend it to people who like fantasy/magical genre.
Overall, the story gives a nice albeit a cliche feeling but it stands well on its own points as well.
I would suggest the author to be a bit more thorough with the grammatical errors though they don't take away much from enjoying the read :)

My only advice : You should write what you feel good and comfortable with. Don't go with what others want or what's in the fad for the moment. Keep up the good work.

Discovering evil
1 week ago
Wow. This actually has me shook. It's so sad. View More
Eternal Sin · C0
6 months ago
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Lord of the Mysteries · C1
6 months ago
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Legend of Fuyao · C1
6 months ago
Reading Status: C9
This is a very good novel and I was quite interested that it was a transmigration story with a female lead. The writing is so good that the reader can feel the characters and their personalities very well. I think you should shorten your paragraphs so people can read it a bit easier. With a more varied paragraph structure you can immerse your readers more and they can understand the story easier (I think!) Anyway I recommend this novel to all those who like transmigration stories or ones with a female lead. View More
Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack Of Various Characters
6 months ago
Thank you so much! View More

RedSonia: I like the story. Characters are interesting.
At the beginning, first 1-2 chapters are a bit confusing, but after that it gets much better.
If you are into magic and unexpected, try out this novel. It gets better with each next chapter.

Author: Keep on writing! You have great imagination. I will keep this novel in my library, expecting your next updates!

Discovering evil
6 months ago

RedSonia: I like the story. Characters are interesting.
At the beginning, first 1-2 chapters are a bit confusing, but after that it gets much better.
If you are into magic and unexpected, try out this novel. It gets better with each next chapter.

Author: Keep on writing! You have great imagination. I will keep this novel in my library, expecting your next updates!

Discovering evil
6 months ago
Thanks so much! I'm going to change it so the paragraphs aren't as long and I wasn't sure whether or not I should completely rewrite the first chapter or not. View More

RedSonia: I like the storyline.
Suggestion: make your sentences shorter. Some parts need to be read few times to understand.

I look forward to see what is next. 👍

Discovering evil · C1
6 months ago

RedSonia: I like the storyline.
Suggestion: make your sentences shorter. Some parts need to be read few times to understand.

I look forward to see what is next. 👍

Discovering evil · C1
6 months ago
Reading Status: C7
I recommend this book to literally everyone. It is so good and will leave you captivated. The writing quality is perfect (Ican't find anything wrong with it) and the story development is really good. The characters are very unique and each bring something different. I'd encourage everyone to read this. Here I end my review and will get back to reading this wonderful novel. View More
Is this destiny?
6 months ago
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Release That Witch · C1
6 months ago
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Legend of Fuyao · C1
6 months ago
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Blue and Red Vendetta
6 months ago
Reading Status: C3
I think that the novel is really good. I like the plot so far. The stability of updates is good at a chapter a day and the story is developing quite well Please carry on writing as I'm enjoying your novel. View More
Asura's Wrath[DROPPED]
6 months ago
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Legend of Fuyao · C1
6 months ago
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The City of Terror · C1
6 months ago
Me too View More

Rxel: Ooh promising start! Eagerly waiting to see where this is going^^

Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life · C7
6 months ago

Veronica8: Your review. Auto-correct never fails to misinterpret.

6 months ago
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The City of Terror · C1
6 months ago
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Legend of Fuyao · C1
6 months ago

JacksonWalker: Dear CrescentWolf

This novel was pretty good,it was just a little confusing at some points. It wasn't really because of spelling and grammar errors, although you did have a lot of that, it was just that how the situation was described was confusing because of the lack of descriptive words. The characters are ok, although I would like you to explain a bit more on how they met. I haven't read very far into this, only 5-6 chapters, but it's a good idea; you just need to work on your execution. This novel is not for me currently, but maybe if I come back after you get some help with the words and grammar it would be better. I wish you well with your novel.

Sincerely, Jackson M. Walker

Discovering evil
6 months ago
Thanks for the review. Please do read a bit more as it starts to get better - at least I think it does. I'm going to go over the grammar a bit more meticulously from now. Again thank you very much for the review. View More

JacksonWalker: Dear CrescentWolf

This novel was pretty good,it was just a little confusing at some points. It wasn't really because of spelling and grammar errors, although you did have a lot of that, it was just that how the situation was described was confusing because of the lack of descriptive words. The characters are ok, although I would like you to explain a bit more on how they met. I haven't read very far into this, only 5-6 chapters, but it's a good idea; you just need to work on your execution. This novel is not for me currently, but maybe if I come back after you get some help with the words and grammar it would be better. I wish you well with your novel.

Sincerely, Jackson M. Walker

Discovering evil
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The City of Terror · C1
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Legend of Fuyao · C1
6 months ago
Haha! She can remember so much can't remember names. I love it! View More
Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life · C5
6 months ago

xWangan: Thanks for your good words.

About the Zombie Queen part. Right now, you could basically consider her a half-zombie, half-human mutation. I don't really want to spoil too much, but after some time she will indeed increase her control over other zombies, and gain powers that were somewhat similar to the typical 'Zombie Emperors' from other Apocalypse novels.

Still, that will take time, and even then, I will still turn her into my own version of a Zombie Queen, that will use her zombie minions in a diffrent way. But that's all to come for now.

The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing]
6 months ago
Reading Status: C7
This is a solid 5 out of 5 in every aspect. The writing quality is spotless and the stability of updates is perfect with 2 chapters a day. Also the story development is very smooth and enjoyable - I did not see the zombie coming (though its in the title.) View More
The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing]
6 months ago
I did not see the zombie-thing coming View More

FallenBlue: I salute you, author. This is so well-written and good.

The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing] · C2
6 months ago
I really like the opening and the backstory and I must say, I'm hooked. View More
The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing] · C1
6 months ago

xWangan: I think the novel is pretty interesting. I’d say it feels a little bit cliché for me, but it’s not too bad, as characters are distinct enough. As of now the story is pretty short, so it’s hard for me to imagine where you will go with the plot premise.

The stability of updates is great, with chapters every day being released as of now.

The biggest problem I’ve got with this novel, is the way it’s written. While the names are weird for me, but that’s something that I can ignore. The issue is, that you’ve got lots of infodumps and weird formatting.

Don’t get me wrong, it’s not like there’s anything wrong with having infodumps by itself, but at the very least they could be split up into different paragraphs. The way it is now, when a lot of time the text is just like one, solid block going on and on, it’s very hard to read for me personally.

The story itself has some promise to it, so good luck!

Discovering evil
6 months ago
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