CrescentWolf
Lv 3- Joined May 2019
- United Kingdom
- Male
I'm writing novels in my spare time so although I may not upload daily I'll try to upload at some point. I'm kinda new to writing so I hope you enjoy my novel(s).
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Discovering evil
"Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared. "You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in. "Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger." Magic is real. There's a whole world of it. Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn... On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.
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Shiksha_Jerath: The story is only thirteen chapters in when am reviewing it, so not much to go on but it's a promising start.
I would recommend it to people who like fantasy/magical genre.
Overall, the story gives a nice albeit a cliche feeling but it stands well on its own points as well.
I would suggest the author to be a bit more thorough with the grammatical errors though they don't take away much from enjoying the read :)
My only advice : You should write what you feel good and comfortable with. Don't go with what others want or what's in the fad for the moment. Keep up the good work.Discovering evil
Lord of the Mysteries · C1
Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack Of Various Characters
RedSonia: I like the story. Characters are interesting.
At the beginning, first 1-2 chapters are a bit confusing, but after that it gets much better.
If you are into magic and unexpected, try out this novel. It gets better with each next chapter.
Author: Keep on writing! You have great imagination. I will keep this novel in my library, expecting your next updates!Discovering evil
RedSonia: I like the story. Characters are interesting.
At the beginning, first 1-2 chapters are a bit confusing, but after that it gets much better.
If you are into magic and unexpected, try out this novel. It gets better with each next chapter.
Author: Keep on writing! You have great imagination. I will keep this novel in my library, expecting your next updates!Discovering evil
RedSonia: I like the storyline.
Suggestion: make your sentences shorter. Some parts need to be read few times to understand.
I look forward to see what is next. 👍Discovering evil · C1
RedSonia: I like the storyline.
Suggestion: make your sentences shorter. Some parts need to be read few times to understand.
I look forward to see what is next. 👍Discovering evil · C1
Is this destiny?
Release That Witch · C1
Asura's Wrath[DROPPED]
The City of Terror · C1
Rxel: Ooh promising start! Eagerly waiting to see where this is going^^
Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life · C7
The City of Terror · C1
Legend of Fuyao · C1
JacksonWalker: Dear CrescentWolf
This novel was pretty good,it was just a little confusing at some points. It wasn't really because of spelling and grammar errors, although you did have a lot of that, it was just that how the situation was described was confusing because of the lack of descriptive words. The characters are ok, although I would like you to explain a bit more on how they met. I haven't read very far into this, only 5-6 chapters, but it's a good idea; you just need to work on your execution. This novel is not for me currently, but maybe if I come back after you get some help with the words and grammar it would be better. I wish you well with your novel.
Sincerely, Jackson M. WalkerDiscovering evil
JacksonWalker: Dear CrescentWolf
This novel was pretty good,it was just a little confusing at some points. It wasn't really because of spelling and grammar errors, although you did have a lot of that, it was just that how the situation was described was confusing because of the lack of descriptive words. The characters are ok, although I would like you to explain a bit more on how they met. I haven't read very far into this, only 5-6 chapters, but it's a good idea; you just need to work on your execution. This novel is not for me currently, but maybe if I come back after you get some help with the words and grammar it would be better. I wish you well with your novel.
Sincerely, Jackson M. WalkerDiscovering evil
The City of Terror · C1
Legend of Fuyao · C1
Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life · C5
xWangan: Thanks for your good words.
About the Zombie Queen part. Right now, you could basically consider her a half-zombie, half-human mutation. I don't really want to spoil too much, but after some time she will indeed increase her control over other zombies, and gain powers that were somewhat similar to the typical 'Zombie Emperors' from other Apocalypse novels.
Still, that will take time, and even then, I will still turn her into my own version of a Zombie Queen, that will use her zombie minions in a diffrent way. But that's all to come for now.The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing]
The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing]
FallenBlue: I salute you, author. This is so well-written and good.
The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing] · C2
The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance [Rewrite Ongoing] · C1
xWangan: I think the novel is pretty interesting. I’d say it feels a little bit cliché for me, but it’s not too bad, as characters are distinct enough. As of now the story is pretty short, so it’s hard for me to imagine where you will go with the plot premise.
The stability of updates is great, with chapters every day being released as of now.
The biggest problem I’ve got with this novel, is the way it’s written. While the names are weird for me, but that’s something that I can ignore. The issue is, that you’ve got lots of infodumps and weird formatting.
Don’t get me wrong, it’s not like there’s anything wrong with having infodumps by itself, but at the very least they could be split up into different paragraphs. The way it is now, when a lot of time the text is just like one, solid block going on and on, it’s very hard to read for me personally.
The story itself has some promise to it, so good luck!Discovering evil
