Chiyuki_4

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Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
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Wonderful imagery! The first chapter really pulls you in, it’s hard to stop reading after that. I love the dark feel of the story and the world. I’m excited to see where this goes. Keep it up! :)

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Posted

I can’t wait to see how our MC progresses because his life sucks lol I hope he gets a break soon! Let’s see where it goes :)

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Posted

As my own work, I’m very proud of this story and how far it’s come along. Excited for the plans I have for it…and the new chapters upcoming. Get ready for some super seductive and heart throbbing chapters 😩💕

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Commented

Elara sounds like she’s gonna be best girl lol

As the breakfast went on, Elara and I continued to chat lightly, a comfortable rapport developing between us. She was kind, genuine, and not at all like the other heirs, who seemed more interested in gaining favor with the queen or plotting their next move. She didn't seem to care about status as much, nor did she play the game of power quite like the others. There was a quiet strength in her—a confidence that didn't need to be shouted from the rooftops.

The 13th Prince: Wielder of Light and Darkness

The 13th Prince: Wielder of Light and Darkness

Fantasy · The Sizzling Prince

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Commented

Oh???? Are we going to be seeing character development with him?

Valtor gave a soft snort, but the tension around him seemed to loosen for the briefest of moments. He didn't reply, but his gaze lingered on me a little longer than usual.

The 13th Prince: Wielder of Light and Darkness

The 13th Prince: Wielder of Light and Darkness

Fantasy · The Sizzling Prince

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Commented

CONFIDENCE. I LOVE IT

I should've been anxious and worried about what they'd say or think. But instead, I couldn't help but feel a little... amused. It was all so absurd. Here I was, the thirteenth prince, a complete outsider, and somehow the queen had put me here—not for my bloodline, but for something else. For my knowledge, my heart, and, well, for whatever reason she thought might be useful to her kingdom.

The 13th Prince: Wielder of Light and Darkness

The 13th Prince: Wielder of Light and Darkness

Fantasy · The Sizzling Prince

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Posted

Okay, first of all I really need to point out that this writing is high quality. I appreciate how everything flows, you can tell things have been properly edited. It’s a reader’s dream :) the intro was amazing! And the plot is a great concept, I’m excited to see what happens with Aric!

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Posted

Oooh we’re gonna have another bad boy with Damien😭 I can’t wait to see how they develop their relationship! Very well written characters and story and thank you for listing them as well ❤️

Chiyuki_4
Chiyuki_4
1 years ago
Commented

Me too I only watch movies and TV, maybe game and then sleep 😩

"Really?" I asked bewildered when she was through, " you do all this ?" She nod . I shrugged and replied," I only watch movies and sleep."

BOUND  'A game of love and power'

BOUND 'A game of love and power'

Fantasy · ken_marvel