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I just want to say the story is amazing, with the world development and Dion arrogance. This is the first time I see an MC who is allowed to be arrogant who鈥檚 journey has the right amounts of action packed dialogue that showcases his undefeatable Will in a way that keeps you on edge. What I will say is that I feel like we skimmed over the value of bloodlines, where I see them see, holding back the power of his umbrella line, and the constitution, where the balance, the titan, and the mirror should be more utilize in the fights, where we only see emphasis on the titan constitution balance constitution mirror constitution the side of mirror is neglected, and the balance constitution is glossed over where the storyline of the other book bloodlines that the author does we see some emphasis on bloodlines, but same thing stories not finished, but in the 1600 chapters we only see the eyes and the full bloodlines five if you counted the white Phoenix foundation, but again we gloss over the impact that the bloodlines can give so I hope that in your future book you create one web bloodlines versus constitution could be an interesting story in the cultivation world or even a separate style of books where we have one focused on bloodlines in one focused Souly on Constitution but I would say this book rebirth of the nameless immortal has the covered on the constitution side, even though it鈥檚 been neglected a little bit that鈥檚 why I hope in the future one day, you鈥檒l write a book, mainly about bloodlines knowing that most of the two books I鈥檝e mentioned have them framework of the world where bloodlines can thrive.

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Hello author, this is the first time that I write a comment or do I create an account just to re-Joel work, and I鈥檝e been enjoying that, but I have a couple of inquiries that you may be able to enlighten me with. While the progress is fine, I鈥檓 feeling that the essence of the story with the system is being lost where the essence of becoming stronger while getting certain witches and developing certain relationships. The last couple of chapters emphasizes a lot on the main relationship, which is Astro and van has been strongly emphasized as the main wife, which I understand because of the background of Astrid, and needing her to be the rock that van needs to maintain his sanity and empathy and himself I feel like we鈥檝e been losing that call value of the heavenly touch, and the system. That is why my question was more inclined towards. Hopefully we want neglect the system, because the chapter 532 shows us that this companion can match him, but the whole point of the whole story in my opinion what鈥檚 the fine strong little witches will make them stronger, they couldn鈥檛 take him on at least in this realm and when he goes beyond in the chaos, maybe then he鈥檒l funds his match until he grows after this one is just have my hypothesis. I hopefully we don鈥檛 neglect the core value of the system and the cheekiness of getting the women and his politeness, and the character that he create to survive being skinny and meticulous all the while having that fake submissive attitude until they hooked because that was exciting part of the story

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