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disappointed in chapter ngl.

bro love story. he should use this as leverage threatening to resign as a ninja unless he gets clan status for his fam. cause in naruto what happened to his fam cannot happen to clans. it only happens to regular ninjas.

bruh hopefully it is his kid and he let it happen. damien is one of the best characters in dc. imagine a dope batman like the one in this fic ro teach him.

no way the gigachad is back

gc

gc. when my stones reset ill send some yo way

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love this story

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bro i love this fanfic but 3 chapter should be like 1 chap. cause its painfully short chapters. like it takes 3 to 4 chaps to finish a scene.

bro you should do a timeskip. alot of people who write marvel fanfics never actually get to thr main story and it seems like your having the sane prob espically since the chapter keep getting shorter and shorter. if you look at the top rankings the fanfics that succed are those who upload once a day and have medium sized chapters even if their bad cause people like consistency the most. i really like yo story.

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yo you had one part repeat 3 times. i feel cheated from a chapter. still gave ya my 3 stones through in hopes for another chap

amazing bro if you update on the reg this would be easily top 10. once my stones refresh ill send some yo way

bro the next chapter better be tai lung and shefus confertation or else im gonna cry

bro he should be all their disiplines. that would be so cool and unique like they share him. cause at this tike these 3 were together alot and inseperable. its only after the 2nd and 3rd ninja war do they fall apart.