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2019-05-31 Joined Slovakia

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So how old was she when she had her daughter?

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you mean mondstadt right?

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Souls in Teyvat

Souls in Teyvat

Video Games · ARandomMob

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Again he shouldn't be able to know she blushed and looked at the floor wince he is blind

She blushed and looked at the floor, but still grabbed my arm and pulled me. Looks like this wasn't enough to make her escape. Oh!.

Souls in Teyvat

Souls in Teyvat

Video Games · ARandomMob

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I thought he couldn't see expressions

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Souls in Teyvat

Souls in Teyvat

Video Games · ARandomMob

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You are saying that as if guys weren't obsessive at all. As if you'd let your girlfriend have another boyfriend besides you. In fact, guys are even more obsessive than girls.

Tsubasa wanted me for herself, girls were obsessive like that, a lot more so in modern worlds. So obviously my joking proposal was not what she'd choose. At least, that's what I thought.

Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds

Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds

Anime & Comics · Master4thWall

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Great chapter author, keep it up, and don't worry about those kids complaining. I always wondered why people have problems with Yuri in a harem, it's as if they are insecure or something idk.

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Zatanna

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A/N: Whose that Pokémon… I mean member.

God Of The Omniverse

God Of The Omniverse

Movies · God_Of_Brutality

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Lul what about all those translated fics all around webnovel. It's not just Chinese that steal bro.

I can't believe someone actually posted this book on Chinese Qidian, and I can't report it because of some issue with the report content link being incorrect.

Life As Hikigaya Hachiman

Life As Hikigaya Hachiman

Anime & Comics · Leonzky

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And where would he hide those cannons? Inside his pockets?

[It seems like you guys didn't like the previous chapter. Yes, they know the weakness and with so many masters they could take on Shen with ease. However, it is so risky. Why? Because they don't know if Shen has many more cannons that would blast them off without them expecting and also, Jin being blasted off has put quite a pressure and slight fear on the cannon, it's a normal mentality of someone.]

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Movies · SlimeSage

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Guts' gigachad sword

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Also I have a friend that makes custom swords. And I've been pestering him to make me a custom one. So he finally agreed to do it for free ahahaha so I need some ideas. What do you guys think I should order? The Master Sword from Zelda? Frostmourne from WoW WotLK? Zireael, Ciri's sword from the Witcher? Give me your suggestions! *****

A Legacy Continued

A Legacy Continued

Video Games · Sudoku

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Yeah, I noticed after reading the whole chapter, but there is still a mix of both povs in this paragraph as it is told in 3rd person but switched to 'my back' which is first person.

As the morning comes, he hears Olivia knock he lifts Malia who he is pounding below him in a doggy style, and positions Malia with her back on my chest and her legs wide open as he continues to pound her. "Come in"

Wizard in Teen Wolf

Wizard in Teen Wolf

TV · sofnya

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Can you stop switching points of view mid-sentence? Either write a whole paragraph in the first person or third person. But stop using both at the same time it is extremely annoying.

As the morning comes, he hears Olivia knock he lifts Malia who he is pounding below him in a doggy style, and positions Malia with her back on my chest and her legs wide open as he continues to pound her. "Come in"

Wizard in Teen Wolf

Wizard in Teen Wolf

TV · sofnya

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Well, I would certainly want to see some experimental results about not being able to kill them without magic. What about some hydraulic press vs werewolf? Surely you can't survive being crushed to meat paste right?

'It's different from the werewolf system that I know of, is this the system in this country? Not to mention muggles being a hunter and hunting supernaturals being, ha, what a joke, werewolf that I know of cant be killed just by pure wolfsbane, it needs magic to go along with it to make it effective and that is just for them returning to being a human and has really no effect in killing them unless, of course, you can chop off their heads completely. Only magic and another supernatural creature can kill them. Not to mention that I seem to be in the past, as not much muggle technology is around.'

Wizard in Teen Wolf

Wizard in Teen Wolf

TV · sofnya

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Can't lose it if you never had it, right?

"People's lives don't end when they die, it ends when they lose faith."

DC: I am Bruce Wayne

DC: I am Bruce Wayne

Anime & Comics · God_Doom

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