Make dumbledore more powerful. Love it so far tho. Make someone best hIm up, stories stagnate without a goal. why does he want power? Freedom to explore the Stars? Dimention travel? Fun? The goal is not power, power is the by-product Of reaching hIs goals
ch 110 Music, Scheme, and Promise
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Send him to azkahban for being an animagus
ch 108 Getting Better By Learning
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Xp
ch 195 NOTICE: WITHHOLDING FOR FINALS
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dude wat
The son of Poseidon was dead. Eh, who cared. If he died that quickly he was useless anyways.
Book&Literature · AtlasDemigod24
Directions for his power to grow Wave and particle manipulation (OP) Basic superman powers. Fly through subs to „super charge“ Dont just make the MC a genius as no pffense but you sre not tony stark smart😁 Develop his character a bit more, more than judt overcoming fesr in a 0 to 100 kinda way That shit takes time. PleaSe no harem, its just lazy writing A bit of a rant Light does not equate to good, light is neither good not bad. Please dont turn him into a character based on the 21 Century. Rape is bad. I dont disagree but tgey are the patron gods Of vikings who raped and pillaged all over. yes thez were also farmers but still.
ch 14 Saying Goodbye
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HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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