Cyrmaal_Nahuatl - Profile

nope, criticism is just a normal thing. I won't stop. But middle school english as top 1 is just sad xD

that reply just shows, that you have not read any of your old chapters.. what I wrote is absolutely accurate..

indeed, you don't need to be a "nigga" but this is so full of mistakes and errors that it is fu**ing hard to follow the story.

If the idea is to be judged here this piece would get 5* easily. Unfortunately, bad grammar makes the reading experience almost unbearable. Use of personal pronouns is wrong and that is a reason why the story is so so so confusing at times. Tbh it is hard to say something to story and character development and design. Focus while reading is simply somewhere else. If you are able to overlook grammar, spelling and word mistakes and errors (!!) then this one could be a gem for you. If you are annoyed by a shit to of mistakes and errors (again!!!) please do yourself a favor and avoid this piece at any cost.