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Really Really good... Read all current chapters (25) in one go. Needs more lemons though. it's "Kuroinu" after all. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

MMm... ya veo, pero a lo del world buulding es que des mas detalles de los lugares en los que se encuentran los personajes. Por ejemplo. la escuala. solo sabemos como se llama, y que todos los alumons pueden ser anormales o minus... pero mas que eso no sabemos nada de nada. te recomiendo que mires una imagen de la escuela o busques la escuela en el wiki y la describas. describe tambien un poco la ciudad si van caminando o volando. Has que el protagonista note cosas como un robo a 1km y que lo pare solo porque puede y no le cuesta nada, etc. Eso da a indicar que el mundo se mueve y no esta todo quieto como un juego de video hasta que el personaje se digne a ir al area de la quest. Por ejemplo, puede llegar mikoto a la escuela junto a su mama por unos dias o incluso visitar al protagonista en su casa. El les dio su direccion. Tambien involucra mas a Hitomi pues ella tambien trabaja en la escuela que mas... bueno, dado a que ya es conocimiento publico que estudia ahi. Tienen que pasar disturbios o algo. Como regalos que llegan, atentandos calculados para entender mas los poderes del protagonista. Etc. Pues no tengo dudas de que deben haber espias de todos los paises del mundo dentro de la escuela, que juntan los datos del protagonista y medaka para enviarlos afuera. como por ejemplo, que el tiene la habildad de curar heridas en 1 segundo sin importar la severidad. Recuerda que es un mundo donde todo avanza al mismo tiempo. Nada espera a nadie.

Bueno, no esperaba mucho pero quede sorprendido. Recomendaron este FF en reddit y despues de leerlo, casi mancho todo el monitor de la risa y casi me ahogo tomando agua, la gramatica es buenisima y el autor sube los capitulos sin mucha demora entre capitulos. Por lo general me dan miedo los mundos mixtos de varios animes pero el autor los mesclo bastante bien. El protagonista es para los que conocen a Voldigoad OP. Y OP tiene que ser pues en el mundo en el que esta, los poderes son ridiculamente poderosos y random XD. Pero para los que conocen Medaka's Box no se sorprenden mucho. Nomas espero que el autor expanda el mundo pues hasta ahora solo se han mostrado pocas partes del mundo. Asique World Background necesita un poco mas de trabajo. Mi favoritas son Misaka Mikoto y Hitomi Hitoyoshi

Well.. then you didnt know Medaka's Box. The OP girl that appears in from the series and well.... She was made in the original to be OP AS F.

WOW. this is high quality!. I liked it a lot, this is like an eroge of date a live. Shidou is slowly becoming a H protagonist lol, I cant wait for the twins, since he must do them at the same time xD

Wow... A Zero No Tsukaima with an OP original protagonist who is a demon? And quite handsome and ripped it seems lol. Louise stood no chance against his natural charms ahahahhahah. Soon the master it will be hard to tell who is the master here. I quite look forward to MC as the author said. Break Louise's bed and cause her to scream his name. SO Author, pls write very good and very long AND very juicy Rl8 chapters.

Someone recommended me this book. Its good! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I like that mc is using his head to train properly before jumping in to fight demons. with his dreams/reality ability he may not even need a Nichirin Sword to kill them. I hope the H of girls is well done. Nobody wants his future wives and lovers to be just there for numbers, they should help out and more

In NU someone posted this as a good novel. I was skeptical as this is WN we are talking about but It's good, VERY GOOD!!. But to my tastes, i hope for more romance and more âdûlt stuff. Also... mc is getting his arrogance get inside his head, he perfectly knows that he is WEAK if we are talking about the universe power rankings, he wont get in the top 500 at all.

In NU someone posted this as a good novel. I was skeptical as this is WN we are talking about but It's good, VERY GOOD!!. But to my tastes, i hope for more romance and some âdûlt stuff, the juicy and detailed kind!. I found it hilarious about nie lie ranting about haters of his character that he should found a 100 old hag lol. Maybe he can enchant some accesories to boost cultivation speed? he can study the amulet and make 10 rings, one for each finger to boost cultivation maybe?

In NU someone posted this as a good novel. I was skeptical as this is WN we are talking about but It's good, VERY GOOD!!. But to my tastes, i hope for more romance and some âdûlt stuff. But im scared that author wants to add gacha.

In NU someone posted this as a good novel. I was skeptical as this is WN we are talking about but Its good!. But to my tastes i hope for more romance and some adult stuff but we cant have everything

Author... estoy muerto de sueño por tu culpa.... Me lei como 40 capitulos de 1 porque no podia dormir sin saber que pasa... Ahora me voy a dormir pues son las 7AM dia domingo....

Imagine being able to summon animeverse girls as your wives... But they dont love you right away and may even hate you if you do badly like a normal girl... I cant help but imagine if mc summons a yandere and he has no idea lol.... Its works like a gacha where the mc gets cards that summons the girls, he can trade those cards before summoning and sell them to the system in case of a dud. But there is an issue, the gacha only shows the name of the girl, their rarity, the gamer class they would gain such as thief, rouge, assassin, etc and the universe she is from, there is no other information, imagine if he does not know schooldays and summons Sekai Saionji with the assassin job... GG!!!!. Yanderes are fine and all on the screen... but LIVING with one? NOP NOP, not unless i have ways to protect myself with 100% certainty