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The concept and story is good enough but it lacks in world building specially when we talk about Interstellar civilization and the universe. There is a lot of confusion when talking about solar system and galaxies.

One of the best books I have read so far.

The story is well written (although the setting is similar to some other novels). The beginning was slow-paced and had very little character development and world background(which is still a lot lacking), but the story progression was fine so no complaints. The MC sometimes acts like a dense-headed Dunce who lacks a presence of mind but it's funny that way and his situational awareness is good. Since the system is a shop type the business aspect felt a bit lacking since it was mostly used to suppress powerful people and also it is a lot less talkative and doesn't help much( asking a low IQ MC to figure out its functions on his own is like asking a newborn baby to walk) The magic and spell system and world background and development leave a lot to be desired. Let's just hope new worlds are not introduced when the MC has not even explored the 1% of his current word. All in all, I like it and was worth reading. (Evaluation after reading 163 chapters)