I'm sad with the author, where's Arifureta? He even added and killed the dumb hero of the story and still hasn't included the world of Arifureta and the women from there, and he keeps adding other worlds that haven't even had any interaction out of nowhere...
Sakura was no longer a little girl, and she was with her mother and sister, tired after their evening exercise. How could it be her? Actually, it's Ilya, and as always, this work is sorely lacking in editing, with many problems regarding context and chronology.
Wasn't Yukino the one with ice powers? Why did she suddenly develop space/void powers?
Perhaps her use in this fanfic is original, but she herself is not a character created exclusively for this fanfic; she exists in the original work.
Hayasaki Nao is not an original character in this fanfic; she exists and is Ai's mother. What Inori said is a lie, or half-truths; in other words, she's a maid. Because the character actually exists in the original work...
I thought it was awful to use 'Yukimom' and 'Yuimom' for their names, it sounds like Digimon... Are you translating this yourself or is it AI?
I'm guessing the translation is done by AI; the guy has been skipping revisions for several chapters now and still has the nerve to promote his Patreon.
This lack of proofreading of the character names is awful, it's Chito not Chinu, it's another character and she's not in the group.
This chapter is repeating the previous one.
Hey Author, have Eiji and his wives (Harem) go to the world of Black Bullet and save the CURSED CHILDREN (GASTREA) and hunt down/eliminate the world of people who hate children! :)
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