KyoelPaska_LSSS

KyoelPaska_LSSS

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2019-06-08 Joined Global
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KyoelPaska_LSSS
18 hours ago
Commented

Hey Author, have Eiji and his wives (Harem) go to the world of Black Bullet and save the CURSED CHILDREN (GASTREA) and hunt down/eliminate the world of people who hate children! :)

KyoelPaska_LSSS
KyoelPaska_LSSS
1 days ago
Commented

I'm sad with the author, where's Arifureta? He even added and killed the dumb hero of the story and still hasn't included the world of Arifureta and the women from there, and he keeps adding other worlds that haven't even had any interaction out of nowhere...

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
2 days ago
Commented

Sakura was no longer a little girl, and she was with her mother and sister, tired after their evening exercise. How could it be her? Actually, it's Ilya, and as always, this work is sorely lacking in editing, with many problems regarding context and chronology.

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
9 days ago
Commented

Wasn't Yukino the one with ice powers? Why did she suddenly develop space/void powers?

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
12 days ago
Replied to KyoelPaska_LSSS

Perhaps her use in this fanfic is original, but she herself is not a character created exclusively for this fanfic; she exists in the original work.

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
12 days ago
Commented

Hayasaki Nao is not an original character in this fanfic; she exists and is Ai's mother. What Inori said is a lie, or half-truths; in other words, she's a maid. Because the character actually exists in the original work...

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
18 days ago
Commented

I thought it was awful to use 'Yukimom' and 'Yuimom' for their names, it sounds like Digimon... Are you translating this yourself or is it AI?

KyoelPaska_LSSS
KyoelPaska_LSSS
26 days ago
Replied to Lunar_Light

I'm guessing the translation is done by AI; the guy has been skipping revisions for several chapters now and still has the nerve to promote his Patreon.

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
27 days ago
Commented

This lack of proofreading of the character names is awful, it's Chito not Chinu, it's another character and she's not in the group.

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KyoelPaska_LSSS
28 days ago
Commented

This chapter is repeating the previous one.

  • Obtendo um Sistema Gacha em Dias Modernos! original

    Obtendo um Sistema Gacha em Dias Modernos!

    Urban

    Lucas Ferraz, um jovem estudante comum que ama cultura geek, saiu pra mais um dia normal de aula no Colégio Estadual Rodrigues Almeida, quando sua vida mudou de cabeça para baixo, quando a sala do 3°B ao lado da sua derrepente explode do nada e os alunos dela desaparecem mistériosamente. Abalado com os eventos ele e todos os estudantes são dispensado da escola para casa. Chegando em casa tremendo, ele encontra conforto nos braços de sua família. Enquanto se preparava pra dormir, algo mágico ocorreu... #Romance #Gacha #System #empire

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