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did a lil fan art, its kinda bad tho but whatever[img=recommend], love your work guiltythree, gratz oj top #8, hope you can get top 5 in a the future

You can always look it up on *cough* i mean AHHH what a shamee

ohh ok thx

uh... does the author dont give an extra chapter for every 100 gt? because there dont seem to be extra chapters for every 100gt, he updates 2 chapters per day

Really like how the story is taking and how the author potrays and write the characters. feels realistic i like it although its slow, i dont mind

why the fuck did i give it 2.5 starts welp it is what it is i was so mad i made typos lmao

what the f did i just read... ok listen here guys these story highlights a mentaly deprived idiotic lucky mc who cant seem to put his points straight whilst having a thing for taking unnecesary risks as he looks out for ways to duck himself over but still somehow succeding. the decisions the mc makes in this novel IS LIKELY TO CAUSE BRAIN DAMAGE SO BE CAREFUL. like imagine paying someone not known with no fame and ussually only plays extras, 15 MILION dollars, YES 15 MILION DOLLARS to play in a movie with 90 mil budget just because he was popular in mcs past life... LIKE WHY????? mc legit paid 15k dollar for his lead in hsi first movie.... and the guy he pain 15 mil for somehow just had good acting skills.... LIKE WHATTTTTT. +++ fl falls for mc in first sight +++ shit side characters +++ shit inconsistent personality +++ shit explanations +++ unlogical characters its just bad... read the authors other works instead pls thanks!

decent, it has good grammar and a very descriptive style of writing but somehow it just feels monotone to me, i read like 15 chapters and so far theres nothing that piques my interest,make my blood pump or make me giggle. i recomend the author to try and think about the way hes writing and potrayng his story right now as even from the first 15 chapters the actions the mc do and what hes saying feels somehow odd since whats hes thinking isnt what hes doing creating a somewhat inconsistent character, ontop of that although i respect the effort having a descriptive writing style doesnt meanto repeat certain things in different ways like for example its better to just make the main character Do the action than writing about the ideas of the main character and then explaining him doing it right after. I mean cant blame the author since the setting in general puts mc in a very uh how do i describe it... advatageus enviroment? the readers cant feel the chaos nor the panic/fear that is, whats gonna happen to the main characterr since he could just well... turn back timeee. welp sry for writing this but i do see a lot of potential in this novel as from a creative point of view its a 5/5 i personally enjoyed the world building. And oh writing the main character as being lost kinda annoys me as hes supposed to be a top tier agent. welp thats all

Ok im gonna be real this novel is atmost decent, but because of the simple writing style and satisfaction you get through mc's growth, its very enioyable to read. The system he gets although preety op, isnt to the point of bsness, i like the characters and although some instances feels a bit forced to create realism, its still great. Unlike the authors previous work, the holliwood thing, this novel is atleas 100000000000x better. Author seem to have learned a lot and managed to create a genuinely good novel, it may get worse in the future but as of know that it like 80 something chapters, its been preety good[img=recommend]