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I really liked this story, which is a surprise because when I saw the MC's "cheats" I thought it would be cliché and boring, but the author managed to balance the development of the plot while strengthening the protagonist. I read both the manhua and the Novel and I didn't find the story repetitive, I look forward to more chapters. 🫡✌️

I like that the author isn't simply copying and pasting things from the TV series, I can tell when they do that. He clearly knows this world and has a certain freedom to present characters and future dangers. I think it's cool that the MC knows he has an OP power but also knows he needs to get stronger and improve, he's not a "perfect" protagonist, he has flaws and can make mistakes. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I'm really surprised by how good my experience reading this story has been. There have been 9 chapters so far, with no absurd powers, exciting fights or unexpected twists, just good old development, I feel that the author is creating a solid foundation for his story. It's 1940, the Second World War (...Steve) hasn't even started yet and yet I was more interested in reading these chapters about finance and management than 95% of the stories that exist on this website/app. I sincerely hope this story doesn't go down like so many others.

Delete this comment man, you have to read it before giving your opinion on the story and not just try to guess what will happen.

Sim, também acho. Isso não estraga a história, mas atrapalha um pouco a experiência durante a leitura. Por exemplo, aqui no Brasil usamos Metros e Quilômetros, então quando vejo Pounds e Milhas fico meio confuso.

Até agora é uma ótima história. Uma leitura fácil, com um protagonista decente e um enredo instigante. Se fosse para apontar algo seria que o autor fica usando dois sistemas de medida, mas tirando isso, é uma história que vale apena ler. Espero que o autor não deixe cair.

Que raro uma fanfic de Arcane/LoL nesse site. Muito boa a história, li 27 capítulos e estou adorando. Ansioso por mais! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ............................................................................................................................

Bro, at least take the trouble to read the story before commenting on this, like, give me some real reason to think the story is bad.

A great story so far (I've read six chapters), the beginning is not one of my favorites, I don't like it when the protagonists meet a deity and gain powers in roulette wheels before being reborn, I prefer it when the stories skipped that part, but it was still a very good start. I like that the MC has a "realistic" family interaction with the Kents and isn't an annoying person who doesn't consider them family, I like the fact that he hasn't turned into a crazy genocidal killer who goes around killing all metahumans, I like the his powers and how he can grow using magic, after all with Tamaranean powers the MC lost most of the weaknesses that magicians normally have. In conclusion, I hope the author can continue with this level of writing and doesn't discard this story, I always really enjoyed watching Smallville.

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Final Fantasy? Twin brother of sephiroth? I don't even have to read to give my verdict. 😁✌ More chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters ... ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I liked this story, I hope the author doesn't stop or give up in the middle. I liked this story, I hope the author doesn't stop or give up in the middle.

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After reading and deeply analyzing each paragraph of the wonder that this first chapter was, I realized that this fanfic really has the potential to be incredible, I like how the author developed Ben's first 10 years of life, making his mentality and future goals clear (at least your next steps). About your writing, well, I didn't really notice anything wrong, but that doesn't mean much since my English notes, well ... what was I really talking about? Ah yes, with regard to its history, from what I see I only managed to find an error and unfortunately that error is very serious that it is ... THE LACK OF MORE CHAPTERS !!! WHERE IS IT?!! I NEED THIS TO BE HAPPY! NO! I NEED MORE FROM THIS WONDER TO BE ABLE TO SURVIVE !!! In the end, this is a 10/10 fanfic, at least it's the note I give for this wonderful start.

I haven't read the first chapter yet, but just reading your "chapter pilot introduction" has already made you like this fanfic, you seem to understand a lot about the original work (unlike some people who only see three episodes and already think of it as enough content to create a fic), which already makes me very happy. I'm going to read your first chapter and I hope it's not just another good fanfic thrown out. Ah! Before I forget, I'm also BR, so it doesn't matter if your English is refined or not, because mine is certainly much worse (according to my English teacher I'm "SIMPLY, VERY BAD!" Kkk)

I'm currently in chapter 25 and I can say that it was a really pleasant reading, I liked how Jaune Arc got OP without leaving the story boring and tedious. I'm not much of a fan of the Webnovel fanfic, but that was worth it. I hope the author doesn't give up halfway and let the story fall. PLEASE DO NOT DROP !!!