Badges 32
Moments 39
just use the author's notes to give information that isn't the chapter?
ch 730 Let Him Go On A Wild Goose Chase
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy · Elyon
that was the joke but in context he spent 3 hours lecturing her about survival and tactical retreat.
After a full three hours, making sure that Nina's thoughts had been corrected, Eli let her go.
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
Good stuff, thanks for the chapters. Hope you are feeling better.
ch 275 Asking A Favour
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
Great ending to the battle.
ch 268 Revealing The Truth
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
she has hiking boots, its implied that she hikes. Solar charger is a must for hikers lol.
As she walked out of her house, she realized she was not the only one wanting to leave. She saw many people in the halls even though it was so late at night. They were taking large boxes out of their house. Seeing such things, she could only shake her head. To try to leave by car was just plain dumb. Walking was the best bet. This was why she did not take her keys. She had no need to. She only took her phone and a small solar charger. This way, she could keep up to date on the current events at least until the wifi stops working.
RE: My Dragon Girlfriend In The Dragonic Apocalypse
Fantasy · invayne
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ch 1034 A guardian who cannot be defeated (Part 1)
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
uhh, in english?
After contemplating for a few seconds, he grabbed the phone, convincing himself that it was all for the better battery life.
Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Renovator
The menory mechanic and rng factor of them reminds me of beast souls in super gene. Just not as trash.
ch 243 Fangs of a Dragon
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Why do you add authors notes instead of doing creator thoughts?
ch 528 Zephyrus and Untamed Winds
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Fantasy · Grayback
Mmm, meat paste.
ch 390 Negotiation With The Centaur Race [Part 2]
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasy · Elyon
is xinxia perhaps the female Salan we learned about last chapter?
ch 703 Heading Down the Mountain!
Versatile Mage
Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
Trash.
ch 410 I Can Abuse This Kind of Trash As I Please
Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints
Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
Likely not going to be picked.
ch 15 Spear Launcher
Ocean Survival: Check In to be the Great Voyager
Sci-fi · Bombastic Winning
There is also some real issues with flow and pacing. Sometimes the story reads like its just notes you jotted down and not a real scene. Other times decisions are made in a split second with no hesitation or consideration to the possible outcome of said choice. There is, for lack of a better term off the top of my head, little REALISM to your characters sometimes. Making believeably flawed characters with their own distinct personalities is an integral part of making your story enjoyable. I think your story could really benefit from a good editor, although, I don't know if webnovel offers this to you for free. Just some thoughts, don't take it too seriously. :)
ch 23 Half-Assed Interface, A way to earn High-Grade Crystals
The Tale of the Void Emperor
Fantasy · LivingVoid
But I do like the abyssal arc.
ch 906 I’ll Just Have To Bully You Back!
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy · Elyon