WOW! Not a single summary of the story. Just begging for money in his intro. Great Job author. Maybe you should focus and develop the story first (20-30 chapters) before you ask for donation???
Anime & Comics · Demon_Asmodeo
This story is unreadable. The MC simp over every single female character in the story. Give over the top speech and added a weird system. Riser has already powerful. You did not need to add a system to the story.
Anime & Comics · Boboiboyfan01
What is with you and chapter 9. Is like every time you write a new story. You sit down and think, how can i make 40% of my reader stop reading my story. Why on earth did you have Dudley kill Hedwig on chapter 9. That bird saved Harry life. I just don't understand.
Book&Literature · KasiCair
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
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WOW! Not a single summary of the story. Just begging for money in his intro. Great Job author. Maybe you should focus and develop the story first (20-30 chapters) before you ask for donation???
Naruto: Kokushibo Template System
Anime & Comics · Demon_Asmodeo