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yeah the the type of mc that would "coincidentally" be in an area that a villain would appear.. like bruh!! its only chapter 15 and there are many bs

the simulation system idea is good but the mc's life in the simulation is too bland. the story is.. hmm how should i put it, the interesting parts are skipped and the boring parts are the one that is so emphasized example is the second simulation, it is too detailed for being second simulation(what i mean is the nonsense talks is so detailed) the interactions are too detailed that it makes it boring they are just talking about why they are doing this and that, the explanations are very long its like a clown saying many nonsense things when he can just say it normally with little words. the story is wasted bcause of that its too irritating. (well that's my opinion)

I agree! the long monologues makes it so boring to read sometimes, its ok if it only happened for a little but heh its always there and in every chapter there is always long explanation about some things it's like many explanations less actions, i cant explain it properly

it is good! it has a good potential! but it is ruined by the lack of common sense like any other novels out there. example is in chapter 100+ when he received pills and treasures from the person he released from a seal, he trained for 15 days! i dont know if he used some pills because i feel that he didnt and isnt that BS?! anyways he climbed from mid stage foundation to late stage I AM EXPECTING THAT CAUSE HE CULTIVATES with his mother in law and she is in golden core realm isnt it given that his cultivation should rise cause of the diff in cultivation realm? MY POINT IS WHY THE F DOES HE NOT USE THE PILLS TO INCREASE CULTIVATION?! anyways thats my review IT HAS GOOD POTENTIAL BUT IS RUINED BY THE LACK OF COMMON SENSE AND MANY THINGS I JUST DONT WANT TO GIVE AN EXAMPLE BUT HEY IF UR A NEW READER OF NOVELS TRY THIS

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I've read it until chapter 85 and this is my review: the mc is evil enough but is over dramatic as f*** sorry for that but I am cringing for the OA'ness 🙂 please don't be OA. And why is his daily quest is not changing? (the 100 push-ups 10k run) (I don't know if the author changed it in the latter chapters because like i said i'm still in ch85) but isn't the 100 push ups and 10k run not effective in his body anymore cuase he's strong the only thing that is good is the 3points reward