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Moments 63
Perfume mixed with sweat makes a tantalizing fragrance. Lol so weird.
The rest were ten flight attendants. The scent of their perfume mixed with the sweat in the room, creating a tantalizing aroma. The high school boy occasionally took a glance and his gaze lingered on the flight attendants' tight buttocks and slender calves.
Infinite Ebullience
Sci-fi · Xiangsixihongdou
I appreciate the effort but it feels like the author is trying too hard with all the metaphors and weird imagery.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 Silver Trojan
Infinite Ebullience
Sci-fi · Xiangsixihongdou
My guess is that it is a poorly translated idiom. But I turned on paragraph comments just to see what others are thinking because it’s too weird. Lol
Take a left after getting out of West Bridge Street and walk less than fifty meters, and there's the line 9 bus stop which goes to the train station. Seeing that there were only seven or eight people on the bus, Tang Zheng hesitated for a moment, before biting his teeth and stepping on. If he could, he would really not go on with it. But it's probably better to confess now than to wait for the police to knock at the door.
Infinite Ebullience
Sci-fi · Xiangsixihongdou
No it’s, Up, Up, Down, Down, Left, Right, Left, Right
"Up! Left! Right! Down! Down! Right! I said right! Start over!" shouted a knight as he directed the group in front of him.
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
Fantasy · VOID_
Good start
So begins our tale, in the village of Solgrim, south of the towering Black mountains, in the centre of many rolling plains.
A Time of Tigers - From Peasant to Emperor
Fantasy · Nick_Alderson
So another one of those MCs that just sit mutely always lost in their own thoughts while the world keeps going. Don’t know how many books I have seen this in. I understand he is confused, but staying silent is really weird. And in a real situation it would be extremely off putting.
Churchill lapsed into a moment of thought.
Catastrophe Card King
Games · Blindness
I am starting to think Deconstruction means something else to the author. Because no one naturally thinks deconstructing themselves is the answer to anything.
"As I thought... To obtain my personal panel, I just need to use Deconstruction on myself."
Constructing-Style Wizard
Games · Books Cooked By Hearts
Author doesn’t know math.
The probability of drawing a blank on both occasions is only one percent, and Shi Xiaole doesn't believe he could be that unlucky.
Peerless Martial Arts System
Action · Hazy Grass
He knows he is going to a very dangerous job and wants to get stronger to survive, but he is too afraid to take the less risky jobs that will make him stronger. So, yeah MC sucks so hard in the first half chapter I am going to set a new personal record of dropping a book before finishing chapter 1.
Especially when he knew that even for those at Martial Entry-Level Five, after assuming the position of night patroller, there was still an extremely high mortality rate. He was even more anxious to improve his strength.
I Maximize My Item-dropping Rate
Eastern · Three Questions
Wow first paid chapter and I feel the book has already fallen apart. Lol 1) Translation changed. 2) MC changed. Good to know I don’t have to use FP on this book too.
ch 41 If You're Not Family, You Won't Enter the Same Door
Everyone Has Four Skills
Urban · Li Xinsui
Seriously locked at chapter 18. I only lasted this long trying to give the story/author a chance. No way I am paying coins or FP lol peace.
ch 17 Chapter 17: Terrifying Monster
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
I can’t continue. MC is too stupid and annoying. Author makes it too easy for him by not being realistic. I read my ten minutes +
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Taking advantage of a bargain
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
Not even worth his time, but yet drained his bullets.
The fighting ability of the zombie he'd just killed was simply too pathetic, Song Jian didn't even consider it worth his time;
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
Concur. So cringe.
"Puppet? Zombie? One-time usage item? What's this crap?" Song Jian held the card between two fingers, his lips curled down in dissatisfaction;
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
Don’t know if the author is trying to make us dislike the MC but so far there is nothing relatable or likeable about him.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: It Can Actually Move
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
Just kill this mc and give us a new one. All he does is exclaim (“!”) a lot and over react.
"Damn it, it really is a zombie, it can move!" Sweat drenched Song Jian's body as he lifted his gun and repeatedly pulled the trigger. There were nine bullets left in the gun, and Song Jian fired them all, the mutated zombie's body spraying out gouts of unidentified liquid as its Vitality Points were rapidly reduced to zero.
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
Yeah homeboy hasn’t seemed to notice that the item tags all mention out of game. And why didn’t we get a item description here.
It's a shame really, this dagger can't be taken out of the game, so there's no way to show off in front of Song Yu.
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
Yeah I think this is where I drop the book. There is just nothing I really like about the main character and his interactions with others. It’s painful to read. Why does he have to act so circumspect with his own brother. Just say here is the facts 1) approached by lady, 2) offered a testing spot and help. What do you think? I bet he will probably hide everything about his territory and ability from his brother too. Instead of two minds working together he is stuck as a simpleton. Then add on all the times he is dazed, shocked, or confused and just spaces out. It’s just annoying. Sorry. Everything else seems to be a good start but I am not patient enough for the author to learn how to write realistic interactions. As a side note, I also don’t want to read another cliche school arc.
ch 57 Tritan Alliance
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
This guy really does feel like a moron at times.
It was around this time that he finally saw a building with a small portion of the wall collapsed. Thanking his miserable luck finally turning, he stumbled towards the building and entered it. It was completely dark now, and except for the few flashes of lightning occasionally, Lex had no other source of light. He was a little fearful; he didn't want to enter the building without being able to see. What if he walked right into a zombie? It was then, like a revelation from the heavens, that he remembered that he had packed a flashlight.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Why was that a joke. Don’t get it?
"I don't have my lunch money today, bruh… my bad."
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99