Badges 7
Moments 45
Learned something new today, apparently opportunity is two words. The fact it looks like one is just an illusion. There is no spoon.
These two words are crucial.
Azure Heaven Saber
Eastern · Feng Lingtianxia
Ok so now he is just stupid and arrogant??
"At this moment, it's not even clear if I am some sort of thief or not. I know I am innocent, and I don't need your approval for that."
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Didn’t loot the thief.
Without thinking anything, Alex simply pulled the sled wagon forward.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Things are not well explained in this book. I don’t know how much of it is translation or author.
ch 0 3 Chapter 2 Changing Trajectory
The Sims: I Open the Immortal Path for All Beings
Eastern · Autumn comes after night rain
He just got done yelling at the world he will steal everything. And now he is upset with the idea??
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Eternal Thief
Fantasy · Wahi
‘Available races that is available’ that is just a horrible set of words. Lol First, just say available once. More than that is redundant. Second, ‘races’ is plural. Plural words use ‘are’ instead of ‘is’. Could have just said ‘the available races’ or ‘the races that are available’
Adrian looked at a virtual avatar that is a splitting image of him. First he looked at the available races that is available which are: Human, Elf, Dwarf, Orc, Gnome, and the newly added Dragonkin which was added thanks to the best player unlocking it 8 months after the game was released.
Omega Summoner
Games · XiaoKongxu
S, B, and SS? Kinda weird lettering scheme
Trainers divide pet resources into nine levels according to the effects they produce. If further subdivided, they are divided into S tier, B tier, and SS tier qualities.
The Strongest Dragon in the Era of Beast Taming
Eastern · CLKX
Note to author, the camp setup was poorly explained so it made it a weird to follow the battle. You explain closing the camp gates. What gates? We’re there walls? Was the river blocked at all? Sometimes details help create a better picture for the reader allowing them to be immersed more. As it is now it feels a bit choppy and that I am just be told things.
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Night Raid (Please Add to Collection)
The Mysterious Tribulation
Games · The Plagiarist
Why does the author make the MC so horrible?
ch 10 Party
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
Wait this author has written a novel before?? Then why is the writing so bad. I was giving the author some credit, because I thought he was new at this.
'What if I go steal a wooden sword from someone? The wheat fields were such a messy place. If I die again, it doesn't really matter; I just have to try until I am able to steal one. I need a wooden sword; I am Swordsman, not Brawler, so I am quite weak in unarmed combat!'
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
‘A few ways’ implies more than one. Kill creatures is one way.
'Right, silvers are this game's currency. There seem to be only a few ways to earn money: kill creatures.'
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
Yeah, I think this is too much detail. Unless it was to point out that he used a turn key ignition in an IVR level tech world.
After that, the taxi driver folded the wheelchair and placed it in the trunk. Then he closed the trunk and returned to the driver's seat. He twisted the key, started the engine, and then began driving away from the hospital.
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
Does he seriously have to shout evrything? It’s like you took the worst trope of anime and added it to a web series.
"How can there be a handgun in here?" Song Jian shouted;
I have an Apocalypse City
Games · Hair fell out
No one cares about his opinion since he hasn’t said more then 2 words in the first 20 chapters. I tried to keep reading, but there is nothing that makes me want to continue.
Rain was left speechless. It seemed that everyone in the family treated status and pedigree above everything. They didn't even consider that Rain was thinking that he didn't want to waste time at school again… no way in hell he would waste a good part of more than ten years in such a place.
Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Seriously I don’t think the author knows anything about kids. My daughter is 3 and has full blown conversations and is able to express her interests and desires. Either the author is making rain a retard, or they are doing the whole ‘I have to hide everything from everyone, even my parents, and even if it is to my own detriment’
"... Why?" Rain asked while having a hard time not furrowing his eyebrows.
Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Yeah sometimes it takes so long to get anything resolved in this book. This chapter had nothing to it. Just another hanger.
ch 507 Return
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain