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Im just hoping he doesnt forsake human interaction and become a murderhobo who kills just for the sake of killing.

I feel like he is not learning from his mistakes. When we went brutal on those weaker kids parents got involve and he lost his eye. So killing a random weak peron in a cave when he doesnt know the area or her background feels stupid for all he knows her high mage dad is waiting a few miles away and his actions lead to his death. This chapter feels like a way to show how brutal he has become but to me he feels like a kid that refuses to learn from his mistakes. He keeps feeling bad when he kills people for no real reason and hasnt looked back and relized most of the times he does leads him to trouble.

Think about Sunny she has been trying to get her in the coumpany for months with ether no response or refusal if she does compete and Sunny is a judge id through her work out because she is making the company look like a joke to her.

the fact that the mc disregards feelings he had while human and having no secondary characters to relate to makes you have no attachment to him. if it wasnt for all the humans dieing id rather have a story about them. Overlord has the same problem mc becomes unrelatable after abondoning his human side causing me to drop it. ill give it a few more chapters but ill probably end up droping it due to only being a power fantasy with an unrelatable mc.

How is Cheyenne smart enough to have built up her own company but stupid enough to have not kicked karen to the curb ages ago. With how bad she is treated by almost every family member she has and still give them the benefit of doubt like this just shows incompetence and make me wonder why Lucas has stayed with her since both her sister and miss stone have her kindness and looks with less to no stupidity.

none of this makes since Giselle knows Lucas has power because she was at the auction and Ethan isnt so much of an idiot that he wouldnt tell his underlings to be respectful to Lucas. so the last couple chapters make no since.

The fluff is getting annoying and the elders of the Parker family should have warned everyone in there family not to mess with Lucas after the auction. With how stupid some of these families act its hard to believe that they hold any power in the business world at all. Anyone with a brain that was at the auction could put together that he must be the secretive chairman/ big spender at the previous auction it makes no since at this point for people with a powerful background to not have an idea of who he is.

I'm starting to feel like Andrew deserves Hanna at this point even though i hate her and want her racked through the coals. I was rooting for Andrew to end it with Hanna back before the gala and still think he's and idiot for not doing so.

The bad thing is i blame Tristan for this not Andrew because Tristan has shown that he has learned multiple times about keeping things from people yet he still does it. If not him Lillie should have said something because she knows how much it hurt for the truth to be hidden from you.

Your lucky to be able to get drunk so quickly my first experience with hard liquor took almost 3 liters of of whiskey in 1-2 hours to get drunk then finshed the night with over 30 beers