Walking_The_Path - Profile

Enslaved by the system is a bad trope I have dropped all novels where the system controlled the mc like a puppet because it removes all agency of the mc and makes the system look 10x worse

I usually read one novel at a time and a character with no ambition and only cares about survival is kinda boring no offense as far as your foreshadowing you blame it on the reader mabye you just did bad foreshadowing? I have read and enjoyed scifi novels before so that is null it's funny how you throw all the problems with your novel on the reader's

ok writing style some errors here and there very little to non existent character development 28 chapters in the mc is annoying enough I stopped reading I kept reading to 28 chapters hoping he would get some development but nothing happened which was disappointing to me another problem is the mc is said to be smart but at most he is average or below average intelligence you can see it in the decision's he makes

Another thing you said I found funny which is you have not finished a more then 2000 chapter novel so you can't comment on it or you try to use that to somehow discount my point is the most bs thing I have seen in while thanks for the laughs why would I read and finish a novel I don't like can't stop laughing priceless

I said what I thought was true if you don't agree I don't care the fact is greed without limits makes you a monster or beast if you like such characters then do what you want I don't care but don't assume everyone has to agree with you or I can't say what I think everyone has different options learn to live with it

The novel over all was ruff and uninteresting from the weird writing style that hurt my eyes to read to the uninteresting characters and the mc that feels and acts like a side character I got all that from reading 10 chapters if I read more I would have to stab my own eyes to save myself

Good thing not every random person's wish comes true otherwise life would be terrible for everyone I dropped the novel btw the characters just are not my taste the power system did not intrest me I was just bored reading it after like 15 chapters so I dropped it

If there is no character development within the first 20 characters no sane person would read 40 or more chapters to see character development especially if they don't like the mc the mc is just disgusting no other way to put it

As long as he is not a fool that only lives to chase and collect women I may give it a try

At some point I just became indifferent to the reverend Insanity's mc he has no redeeming qualities he is just a murnder hobo that kills for greed and power nothing special really at least leylin from WMW had redeeming qualities and you could relate to him at least a little

From the way you described your mc is like a diamond spoon young master that just wants to chase women with no goals or ambition and overall boring personality its sounds completely uninteresting to me personally

I read 10 chapters ahead of chapter 7 chapter 17 the mc still acts stupid and annoying no growth at all

The first chapter gave away the mc was a child and will probably stay that way

I can confirm the author is a narcissist since he thinks he's the god of comedy and only his comedy should be funny and if you don't find him funny you don't have a sense of humor according to the author! what a joke!

thanks for putting the filter in the first chapter so I don't have to suffer through your novel one good thing you did for me

Why would I feel butthurt when you literally think that your comedy is the only type of comedy is that low self esteem I sense? Because it should be common sense not all comedy are equal comedians should tell you that I feel disappointed of how you view people that don't pass your first chapter they don't think I am funny so they must have no sense of humor that's pretty childish thinking right there

Have you ever thought why some comedy appeals to some people but not to others? it boils down to taste and age the comedy you are showcasing may not appeal to a older audience that's it if you think that because someone does not enjoy your comedy that they no sense of humor is just wrong and ridiculous in fact its funny you think that at all

The reason psychology is important is because it helps make more believable characters psychology helps understand human nature and how humans interact and human behaviors knowing this can help you become a better writer in the future personally your novel just was not my taste it seemed kinda childish in the first chapter alone it did not have the mature vibe I was looking for I am sure a younger audience would probably enjoy your novel more then me good luck with your writing no one is a great writer in the beginning and not all audiences will enjoy a work thanks for reading

It's just beautiful what you wrote it made me laugh many times it was glorious

am disappointed you think that to bad hope you become a better author I would recommend reading a ton of stories so you can understand what I was talking about