so much for he isn't worthy of his mommy....
Tong Lele added, "He is the president of the Mo International organization, 30 years old, single at the moment, and has no bad vices. Out of curiosity, I hacked into the company's system to check their finance department, and I realized… mommy! This man is worthy of marriage! You should marry, no, must marry him!"
Urban · Fish Sauce 2000
ummmmm didn't she drive herself?!?! it said previously ch 48 opened with her following navigation directions to arrive.... now she is just leaving her car?
ch 52 Without My Permission, You Are Not Allowed to Leave
Urban · Fish Sauce 2000
oh heavens 🤣😂🤣💞
"He is my bride! I won't let anyone take him!"
Fantasy · YawningBrain
Suggestion: Looking at Jennie, her maid, (i recommend cutting {her} from in front of the maids name.
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Fantasy · RMA_19
suggestion: she shouted(,) holding
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Fantasy · RMA_19
last line suggestion: but (it) did not mean she would make it easy for them.
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Fantasy · RMA_19
suggestion Just like in her previous life, in her (father's) point of view
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Fantasy · RMA_19
but I thought she got that back before she forced a half-@$$ apology from trashta & Allen....
The black tassel that he got from Evelyn is the only thing that she left behind for him.
Fantasy · MyCatPaws
lol, I use Google docs on my phone, since my laptop crashed & i don't have cash to replace the battery core. I also only offered as I enjoy the story & got a lot of time on my hands babysitting my mother-in-law (several hip surgeries left her mobility challenged). So I don't mind. I'm just sitting around reading most of the time. lol
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Fantasy · RMA_19
her main goal, to beat him with a jewel kick. any other method of winning will leave her unsatisfied.
Evelyn, who saw her brother wrinkle his face, began to plan on how she can kick his jewels.
Fantasy · MyCatPaws
yeah there are a number of minor mistakes, but it's a fun story. I just didn't want to leave a ton of comment notes.... but if ya want someone to do a preliminary read through to try catch things. I don't mind being a spare set of eyes. [img=recommend]
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Fantasy · RMA_19
yeah i noticed it several times. .. do you use Google docs?
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Fantasy · RMA_19
yep, Sir Howard & Jen lined up to get tickets on that ship... this is just my supposition but... So, her bio father stole his brother God's son & hid him (our 'charming' Duke) the rose gold thread of a strong fire user...
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Fantasy · RMA_19
yep every sign for a ship right there....
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Fantasy · RMA_19
hallucinations i think the h got dropped possibly in editing
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Fantasy · RMA_19
suggestion: i think substituting 'mortal' with 'deadly' would make this read smoother.
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Fantasy · RMA_19
oh I am loving the butler character.!!!!! I hope he has a good size play in the story. he with the two knights would be a great 3 stooges team, or so it seems.
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Fantasy · RMA_19
correction suggestion: It's "nothing" at all like the fairytale you are imagining.
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Fantasy · RMA_19
why not use this event to publicly gift him the rings
She still had their wedding rings. Why did she feel like the task of giving it to him was so complicated?
Urban · Passion Honey
she called the chef to be sure there would be no raspberries at dinner & discovered the situation. best answer
If he asked me how I knew about the pie, how would I explain it to him? I bit my lips. I could lie but I did not want him to be suspicious of me, so I sighed and nodded, closing my eyes.
Villains also get second chance
History · nishidurani