Badges 5
Moments 11
Servants+1
Servants or not?
Dual Cultivation In Martial Peak
Anime & Comics · Pastlives
Keep up the good work. This ff is healing my eyes.
No one is dad mat at their first. Plus considering your hypocrisy you might be in for some horrible future. Toughen up. Life isn't fair so you better work on yourself, your decisions and their consequenses before it slaps you and you blame others instead of yourself. Like what happened with...Kimi was her name.
Truthfully, I am not dad material. So when she said "Papa" for the first time, I was frowning.
The Cursed Gamer
Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
Well written so far. Chapters could be 2 pages longer and maybe using a cliffhanger or two might be good. Some things exceed common sense character developement but I'll account that to creative freedom of you as an author. Personally I'd have darkened the MC personality a tiny bit(Cruel repeating treatments by the elite i.e.). Developing him into a more dominating confident personality might be a good direction to follow, but I really like it so far. Nothing is too out of order. 4/5 stars imo.
ch 23 Chapter 23
Ultimate NTR System
Urban · Daoistpwhvf9
same
I'm a decent student and don't have much that can be said about me, aside he's about average. I don't have any friends in my current class and just spend most of my time outside classes thinking to myself. At home, I would mostly read manga, novels, and such as well as watch anime... And a lot of hentai... Way too much hentai.
Omni-Harem God: Conquering Worlds and Beauties From All Over Reality.
Fantasy · Ky_Scriptio
i hot it probably... Maybe? $=S ^=e (exponent) #=x (Double cross/hashtag)?
[Chakra Control : 10$^#]
In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System
Anime & Comics · SupremeCookie
Picked up again.... Ves improved his personality from beta to a closet-beta but... Gloriana is still a c***. Ves has every reason to get rid of her. 1. She's a narcist 2. She's not trustworthy(whistleblew in him) 3. She tries to undermime his authority in the clan 4. She tries to bring harmful elements into the clan 5. She can't take steps back in an argument 6. She has a repressed violent character 7. She is emotionally unstable well... I imagine there are 2 outcomes that may happen: The good one is Ves beeing aware and using her until her and her states strength are no danger anymore. The Bad one (and i speak from personal mistakes/experience) is Ves entering an abusive marriage and beeing repressed, violated and abused by his wife plus mother to become a submissive dolllike 'boy'.
ch 2285 Glow Limitations
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Not bad ig
(Author's Note: How was the chapter?
Reborn in Cultivation World with Ultimate Villain Cultivation System
Anime & Comics · Akros_Zero