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The story is interesting, but there are 2 points that spoil the story for me. 1) Too much unnecessary philosophy, almost every couple of chapters, or Adam himself is immersed in philosophy with his actions and his future. Or someone trying to teach him life and share his experience. The problem is that this is too much, especially considering that there are already 277 chapters in the book, and a little more than a month has passed according to the plot of time (if I'm not mistaken). And he plunged into philosophy so many times that this is enough for an ordinary person for half a lifetime. In a word, so much unnecessary philosophy spoils the plot. It doesn't help that after all this, it grows and grows quite a bit. 2) The nature of Adam, he is still indecisive and morally weak. Constant tears about his hypocrisy, and how bad he is, constantly plunging into self-blame for various reasons. It can be said that it is necessary for the growth of the character, but the problem is that it becomes lingering. It's already chapter 277, and I think it's time to put an end to these hesitation, endless self-flagellation and tears. You need to make a good timeskip, otherwise at this pace, even at chapter 600, we will see not much older Adam, and this is very tiring to read. I've read enough books, and 80% of the books that are thrown are not because of a bad plot, a painted world, a food system, etc. And because of the main character of the story. There is nothing more disgusting than the main character who is always indecisive, and full of whining.

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