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A Veteran Novel Reader, Perfectionist and The Bane of all Authors. I will call out every single grammar mistake, so beware.

2019-07-07 Joined Global

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Sorry english is my second language.. i forgot boarding meant that.. Boarding always stuck to me meaning boarding a plane馃槄

This contract would entail that they would take care of all his basic needs which included boarding, feeding, and training.

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Okay.. I was hoping actually that you would pick Barca as we all know they are far past their Golden age and mc could lead the team back to their golden age and beyond

Despite the Portuguese top-flight league not being one of the top five leagues in the world, FC Porto itself was a top-flight team that could rank quite highly among the top 50 clubs in the world.

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She continued moving slowly towards him, her hips now swaying seductively before trying to ask him another question and keep the conversation going, but Jason already caught on to what was going on and quickly interrupted her because he was not having it.

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please no romance right away..

She had a brighter shade of blonde hair than Mylo and had slightly above-average curves. It was not enough for her to be classified as thick, but she wasn't a washing board either and looked quite sexy.

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what about living place?

This contract would entail that they would take care of all his basic needs which included boarding, feeding, and training.

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had to check and indeed it ended 2-0

Jason watched the match till it ended before he stood up from the sofa feeling hungry once again, so he got into the kitchen and quickly displayed the experience of someone who had learned how to cook food in various countries for all the twenty-one years of his career.

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Then change "or" to "and" and erase "almost"

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so we gonna see Bruce wayne on a pitch later? seriously?

"... James Bond, Bruce Wayne, and Jason Bolu," After calling eleven names, Luke finally stopped calling names.

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Well idk.. nowadays i see a lot of sports novels where they just timeskip everything... slow start would be better on a long run

Since then, it had been eleven years and finally, he couldn't hold in the urge to not play on a big field with a crowd.

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gotta ask if you are fan of Barca or Real Madrid? I have a feeling you will put mc on on of them..

Despite the Portuguese top-flight league not being one of the top five leagues in the world, FC Porto itself was a top-flight team that could rank quite highly among the top 50 clubs in the world.

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yap yap

Jason didn't know about other people, but he could smell bullshit, a heavy stink of bullshit, after all, if so many foods were dangerous for people's health, then humanity as well as probably every other life on earth would have been extinct by now.

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for some reason I hear them speak in british accent in my head..

"Yeah man, mad pass," Nico said arriving as well and doing a high five with Jason as well.

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Team B to attack*

They started to move forward slowly into the opponent's half and even began doing some skill moves and going around team C's forwards, but even after a few more minutes team C still hadn't opened any space as they patiently waited for team A to attack.

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useless yap yap

Jason doubted that the Jesse Owens stadium had that many showers and since he wasn't planning to share a bathroom with any other human being that had a p*nis between their legs.

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too much useless thoughts shown and many important parts are left out..

'Hopefully, I don't get terrible teammates,' he sighed as they arrived at the tracks.

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using these names really show you haven't put enough thought into the writing

"... James Bond, Bruce Wayne, and Jason Bolu," After calling eleven names, Luke finally stopped calling names.

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"... James Bond, Bruce Wayne, and Jason Bolu," After calling eleven names, Luke finally stopped calling names.

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Well as a one off character sure but if they will become part of the cast then it would just be weird

"... James Bond, Bruce Wayne, and Jason Bolu," After calling eleven names, Luke finally stopped calling names.

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