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I like the story, but if the story intent was to show struggle of MC then it has already been shown enough already. What is your intent for the story author? To show a weak to strong mc, or to show how a cannon fodder survives in this world? If it's the former then this current pace of plot and growth isn't justified. If you make this clear then readers wouldn't expect something else and then feel disappointed later.

Been such a long time since i felt genuine emotion of triumph in a ff. Most people might not like it for being too realistic, but that's what author wants to paint and he's doing it very well. Great work author.

Could've just had Danzo take the full brunt, then him running away from Konoha and making some hidden organisation to come back and take the blame for everything.

MC is becoming half-ased joker? Very exciting *sarcasm*

Power Girl and Blackfire

Are you still alive author?

Civilian council having access to Ninja movement and ability to restrict Hokage? This sure sounds logical in military dictatorship. 😂 Well i am tired to complaining about it. This story has too much overdramaticness, unearned emotional talks and too much fanfiction theories. Not fit for me.

Unnecessarily dramatic and over the top. Breeding? CRA? Jesus. Dude you were being meta about fanfic writers being too outlandish in the last chapter, but then you do the crime yourself. It feels like a Code Geass story with that over the top plan of MC rather than Naruto.

This is too melodramatic. Veteran ninjas losing their patience over and over again and MC preaching them life lessons. Hiruzen, Kakashi and now even Hiashi. Yes, Naruto did talk jutsu too in canon, but it felt earned after long fight and struggle. Here MC just preaches. It doesn't feel earned at all, because nothing happened that led to it.

>unlike others his cultivation would get harder and harder Lol what? It's the same for everyone. As he has a big cheat. If he uses it to maximum then he would get faster cultivation. He already has a 340% permanent buff. Why aren't we reading more on how his buffs are affecting his cultivation. .

It was same as canon, hopefully this is the first and last time, because we all have read canon story. Formatting needs a lot of work.

Have always pushed for 2 main girls with Rias and Akeno, but if there can only be one then Rias would be the obvious choice. Akeno is good too, but she can't compare to Rias. She is also Rias's servent, so her becoming main girl over rias seems counter intuitive.

Her being a lo*li probably gives her a lot of support. Lots of people like that despite the obvious wrongness in it, but it comes with anime so you learn to ignore it. As a character she's is as uninteresting to me as Asia, and Irina are. I also hate lo*li genre in general, and on top of it if you think about it, she's just a little kid with ptsd and other issues. Rather not see her in a harem.

Kuroka, Rossweisse, Yasaka are fine. Ambivalent towards Xenovia, and Koneko i wouldn't like to see.

Xie latest powerup seems to be overlapping with MC.

When MC doesn't reciprocate waifus feelings

Seriously a lot of his potential is being unnecessarily wasted. He could've been increasing a lot faster in hollow world after he got his stealth. This is like everything else in story has become unnecessarily forced. Plot is about to start, and does it make sense for him to complete all his evolutions in 2 yrs while he wasted 10 years as basic hollow?