Webnovel Author: _Morpheos_ - Fanfic Collection

1.- la calidad de escritura es normal, no es muy detallista con los entornos o personajes y sus transfondos, pero no te quita la imaginación detallando cada átomo de su cuerpo. 2.- buena actualización :) 3.- no ha llegado a nada por ahora pero tiene buen ritmo. 4.- un defecto que tiene es la poca información que muestra de los personajes, asumiendo que uno los conoce en primer lugar, esto depende del personaje, no todos. 5.- pense en un principio que el Universo se iba a ir a la mierda en el capitulo 10, ahora parece que podrian coexistir. Buena historia.

1.- It seems to be written at the same time that you are watching an episode of Rick and Morty, everything goes very fast and there is little general information about the place or environment. 2.- in chapter 3 it seems to be in the third person but it is being written in the first person, which is disconcerting, is the boy omnipresent? Or is it you, I don't know. 3.-This is more personal, I don't know how old the author is, but the Smith family and especially Rick are not good people, they are all defective in themselves, Rick is infinitely intelligent but that does not make him an idolizable character, nor does Beth , Jerry is normal, not an idiot, he is normal in my opinion, an average American. The story has its flaws but is readable within the standard.

I have a problem with this kind of story in which everything is given to the protagonist on a silver platter, I don't get through a single chapter after the first 5 of fillers and the protagonist is already a multi-millionaire, I don't want to think afterwards what he'll do with the copy of Cortana. I will wait for another chapter and change the result

5 chapters, 5 chapters are enough to condemn this work to be burned at the stake, don't you believe me? Read this, there is no character development, things just happen, the characters talk like retards and the villain of blade 1 in chapter 5 claims to be from Shield, from that point I said this is dead

This fanfic seems written by a Chinese kid locked in a basement, 100 chapters in which basically nothing happens, in 100 chapters only a few days have passed since the story began and that's disgusting. The chapters are made up mostly of random text and things that were made clear before, the author believes that it is a good idea to put 10 women in one chapter at once and the only characteristics that define them are "pretty and big tits" besides that it is Obviously this is plagiarism, I've read enough Chinese novels to know that this was written in faloo or something similar.