While I've been enjoying the story so far, it's a little disappointing to read this. I mean, why not go for the Arabian style? It's more niche, and it's totally different from the typical hotel styles, let's be honest. Most hotels adopt that one giant building scheme, which is a little boring, especially since he's depressed and looking for something different. And also, the reason for choosing the castle theme is winter?? Like dude!!!! You're literally building it in a parallel space that can appear on different parts of the universe at the same time and not earth. And on top of that, I'm pretty sure I saw weather as one of the greyed out options on the design tab. Even if you can't decide the weather right now – as something that revolves around the entire universe and not just the tiny speck in the Milky Way galaxy that is earth – it's unlikely that the earth's climate is going to even be the basis of the Inn's climate. I had no idea this bothered me so much till I realized how much I wrote
After thinking for a while, he settled on the making something like what he imagined a Lords Manor would look like, not that he knew specifically what that should look like. He'd seen a couple of pictures of Buckingham palace online, maybe that's what he should aim towards. His decision was based on the fact that winter was on the horizon and when he imagined comfort in cold weather, that's what he thought of.
Fantasy · lifesketcher
there's so much I find wrong with this. How many so called 'loved ones' does a person really need to no longer be alone. i think a loving family and even just one loyal and dependable friend is more than one could ask for. however we can't really expect much reasonability from our traumatized MC
Inside, though, Lith had changed very little. He was still the cynical, mistrustful broken man he had always been, with no real friend or loved one outside his family and Solus.
Fantasy · Legion20
Please take care of the errors, they're way too many and essentially 'delete' a huge chunk of the content.
ch 68 Silver Luster Hall's True Background!
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
Yeah... notice the phrase 'system holder'? That's an indication that you should throw out all of your physics knowledge in this story.
"Back in the old world, they say that the humans took 72 hours to reach the moon… Well, I did it in a blink of an eye" - Evans, Holder of the Hermes System, the Year 1327 APC.
Fantasy · Romeru
How does that even relate here?
"Back in the old world, they say that the humans took 72 hours to reach the moon… Well, I did it in a blink of an eye" - Evans, Holder of the Hermes System, the Year 1327 APC.
Fantasy · Romeru
This is fucking cotton candy
"Only a single piece of silver coin!" Lino observed closely as the girl took a stick from the stack and then used a set of magical arrays inside a strange construct to weave the sugar-coated wool around the stick like magic. The entire process barely took a single minute. Taking the stick, Lino handed two silver coins and winked at the girl who blushed faintly as she expressed her thanks in a low mumble.
Fantasy · beddedOtaku
I'm sorry but, is there a mistake? There's a mistake right?
A boy, about fifteen or sixteen years old and seven feet tall, was sitting on a large rock on top of the peak. He was earnestly studying a parchment in his hand.
Eastern · Shi Yumeng
The eighth wonder of the world.
A boy, about fifteen or sixteen years old and seven feet tall, was sitting on a large rock on top of the peak. He was earnestly studying a parchment in his hand.
Eastern · Shi Yumeng
I don't exactly understand you but... Not having a culture is actually pretty normal if you consider their circumstances. They're the weakest intelligent race, always hunted, no time to settle in any way. It doesn't even have to be that they're robotic or their culture gets 'wiped out'. Those reasons could never apply. They're 'cultureless' because the world and the other races don't give them the time or space for them to settle down and develop one. You could also say they have a culture, but that culture only consists of them hiding from the other races to prevent getting killed or enslaved.
They were but mere appendages to the various major intelligent races. They had no civilization, no empires, no culture, no freedom…
Eastern · Panda Reunion
It's physique, not physic.
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Urban · Mynovel20
Hehe. 'Mystery'... But really, this whole thing is great.
ch 15 A Picture
History · LinaBell
Exactly my point. We know Nara's potential is god-level and the rest can also hold their own but there's still no clear indication of how much they surpass the average person. We can't enjoy it properly that way. Or at least I can't.
We got back to the rest and explained what happened. Marina was a little angry at me for being reckless, but since everything worked out, her anger didn't last long.
Fantasy · BRPever
Hehe... He's not getting the hint
Lin Fan laughed. What is she telling me that for? It's not like I can make two children for her. Still, girls who like children are cute. It means that they are kind-hearted.
Urban · Xin Feng
His parents would never allow it
What the actual ****?!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
70% of Earth's educated population lives that way. It's not new
In all this time Joe had very little to distinguish him from the crowd, in fact you could say he was average in almost every way. Average height, average build, average looks even his name, you could say he's an average Joe. The only things that were his own was his slightly above average intelligence which meant he picked up new things faster and more completely than other people around him and his stubbornness. You may have heard the term "as stubborn as a mule", well Joe could be as stubborn as three mules on strike as one of his bosses once said. As people who work in an office can attest stories stick around and the most prominent one about Joe was when he had a shouting match with the CEO of the company because he didn't agree with how he was treating one of the interns, this quickly snowballed so even though the CEO wanted to sack Joe he couldn't without causing a lot of the interns, new starters and even some of the middle managers who were taught by Joe when they first started taking up arms. So the CEO could only wait and push Joe for early retirement which Joe was happy to agree to.
Fantasy · Belial232
wow, the og average Joe
In all this time Joe had very little to distinguish him from the crowd, in fact you could say he was average in almost every way. Average height, average build, average looks even his name, you could say he's an average Joe. The only things that were his own was his slightly above average intelligence which meant he picked up new things faster and more completely than other people around him and his stubbornness. You may have heard the term "as stubborn as a mule", well Joe could be as stubborn as three mules on strike as one of his bosses once said. As people who work in an office can attest stories stick around and the most prominent one about Joe was when he had a shouting match with the CEO of the company because he didn't agree with how he was treating one of the interns, this quickly snowballed so even though the CEO wanted to sack Joe he couldn't without causing a lot of the interns, new starters and even some of the middle managers who were taught by Joe when they first started taking up arms. So the CEO could only wait and push Joe for early retirement which Joe was happy to agree to.
Fantasy · Belial232
This so-called weakness sounds like a strength to me. I mean, unfeeling and immune to negative status effects, sounds pretty much an advantage.
The Plague Army's only weakness was undead creatures with no souls that felt no pain and were immune to diseases but finding a player rivaling the Plague Army was very difficult.
MMORPG : Ancient WORLD
Games · Aibek