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Commented ntr is the act of stealing a woman in an actual and or active relationship. so as long as it's not that it's fine
It's honestly not netorare. Issei is just delusional that Grayfia loves him and he feels netorare. I'm saying this for those of you who are sensitive to netorare content. I'm sorry, but as long as it's not Riser experiencing it, isn't it okay if other characters experience netorare? Because I'm afraid there will be many moments where Issei experiences something like this. After all, Issei is always crazy and thinks the heroines are his, even if he just met them.
My Inner Voice Heard By Heroines
Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
actually the way you wrote it was great. you even used combo star as a hidden mechanic. but a big question i had was where you resetting with every hit otter gave or every "miss"
So no, my writing isn't flawed (I'm talking to all the know-it-alls in the review sections who seem to think that swearing on fanfiction sites and insulting me makes them look smart and tough), it's your eyesight, your patience and your processing capabilities that is flawed.
Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)
Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi