I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
i been did that.
"That glasses girl…and that doe-eyed girl…" I muttered as I remembered the scene inside Edward's house before I came there.
TV · Alittlepiggy33
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If my dad wasn't a pathological cheater who would cheat on my mom at any given chance, maybe I could strive for a more healthy relationship style, but it's too late now.
TV · Alittlepiggy33
he didnt have to he has more negative karma than positive karma because he used all of his positive karma reread what is said please.
And I'd used up all of my positive karma during the rolls. I would have to stay that way until the next session when they tally my karma points.
TV · Alittlepiggy33
I don't have no son like your dumb ass.
No it is not.
'It doesn't matter,' he thought to himself. 'My world or not, a godly weapon has no business in the hands of an unworthy mortal.' With that he walked into the city, no idea where he was even going to start looking. Luckily, Lady Luck was on his side. He stumbled upon a big building called the Hall of Justice, and there was what seemed to be a press conference happening. He didn't realize it at first, but he could practically feel the presence of his Father.
Book&Literature · Ernesto_5700
You know it.
not it just him.
His jumbled-up thoughts were interrupted by his phone buzzing again which almost gave him a heart attack. It was how Hephaestus had contacted him before and it was probably him this time as well. He took out the phone and held it in his hands, his face a little pale. He truly hoped that the message wasn't just, 'Die', after which he would blow up into smithereens.
Book&Literature · Marine0IQ
digaf no idngaf.
he used 200
[Low-level absorb technique. Only 25% of energy essence can be absorbed. It's a special technique among ordinary absorb techniques. ]
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
It doesn't fucking matter that new chapters came out that fixed what I was talking about I read all the chapters that were out at that time I couldn't care less that you changed it after. This is the end of our conversation good bye.
SpiderGwen: I have a system?!
Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_