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An absolutely wonderful story so far. Keep up the good work. Please.

Wonderful chapter.

Wonderful chapter, I hope you have a amazing new year.

While I get where your coming from as it would be awesome to have a hero without falna, he’s going to need falna eventually to take on the horrors that the dungeon will create, and the more powerful criminals like the Dionysus and the Ishtar familias, as it was stated in the series so far that his max physical ability would be that of a veteran level 2 not saying he isnt powerful and skilled enough to take on D level 3s or people that got carried through the dungeon. He just will not be powerful enough to take on the many monsters he will encounter eventually as he goes deeper into the dungeon, and the actual pro adventurers that turned criminal. Not to mention it will be interesting to see what kinds of skills and abilities he will get from leveling up outside of his emiya abilities and to see how his emiya abilities potentially evolve because of the falna. Another thing is the possibility of him using the grimoire as I don’t know if you have to have falna to use it or not and the spell he could possibly get through it will be most likely pretty interesting.

This feels like its going to be pure gold. You have my vote for now.

Awesome chapter.

I think he’s supposed to be but I wouldnt call him idiotic or a wimp more like naive and a human being. He literally was living underground most of his life with people that cared for him greatly and wanted to shelter him from as many dangers as night city produces. This causes him to be well as before stated naive of things like merc work and the happenings of night city and so far he’s doing pretty good so far for what has happened to him.

So im a bit confused did he get a power from the last SCP or no?

Well I don’t recommend summoning characters because to me it has been over used and kinda seems like a excuse to get someone’s waifu, someone extremely strong, or a mix of both. If you do the character summoning thing I recommend everytime he summons one there must be a test or quest to gain their loyalty that must be as difficult as thier tier or the summons could have a time limit thats based on how much mana MC has and when their out and about it puts a dedicated piece of his mana into lockdown so he can’t use that piece of his mana reserve for anything else except his summon and the summon while in existence would gradually eat up that mana and if the summon wants to do anything that requires mana it drains that mana dedicated to them at a much faster rate a example would be if a goblin mage wanted to cast fireball it would shorten its time by how much mana said fireball cost.

Well I can’t wait to see what your brilliant mind can come up with. Though I love this story there is a kind of cycle to these things storys get stopped because the authors skill level exceeds the beginning by many categories and the story just evolves into something the author does not love anymore or the author is to stubborn to give up on a story and burnout getting rid of a wonder flame of creativity (though that does not mean you should readily give up). Another is outside influences which are always the worst I can not remember how many great authors have had to stop writing because of personal tragedies but let us stop with these depressing notions and celebrate a new beginning perhaps of something greater so I challenge our wonderful author make this new story of yours a one for the ages. Also I hope your aunt has a wonderful recovery.

Dragon

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