thanks for the chap boss
ch 165 Twilight of the Imperium
War 路 Lee_Kah
thanks for the chap boss
ch 12 Fighting
Anime & Comics 路 Wingzer0
threw me through a loop for a moment but I think the concept is kinda cool
ch 13 Chapter 92828273727277282
Anime & Comics 路 Soapety
"What is this? Gross!" the little human says something and pushes my face away. No, I won't let that happen, for the STRAWBERRIES!!, for the TREATS!! So I start petting with even more determination. I am a Mike-hero, my battle to get the treats will be more than legendary.
Movies 路 BlackNilton
um, so the first third of the chapter is in another language
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The End of the World is Approaching
Book&Literature 路 StrongerBrother
thanks for the chapter
ch 10 Training
Anime & Comics 路 Wingzer0
ok, first I was confused but after I got through the system explanation I saw how with this there's a good amount of things and directions you can now take this story with the change. hope this story lasts and doesn't get dropped. rooting for ya, Mr. author
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I honestly love this book. but I think that if you're getting burnt, then take a step back and write something new, something different to give you a new view. and then after a while, if you find it in you, then try and hop back onto this story. it doesn't need to be a day or a week. I'm saying if your truly tired of the story then stop and go to a new one if it helps. but remember that once and a while look back at your previous unfinished stories and try to see if you can continue it.
ch 51 Being straight up
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
thanks for the chapter mate, keep up the good work
ch 0 5 Beach House
Book&Literature 路 OgreSon
yeah I can agree, still makes me chuckle whenever I see them tho lol
thanks for the chapter boss, keep up the good work 馃憤
ch 47 Chapter 47: Interesting discovery
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
love the image, had a chuckle though cause of the arm coming out og his left calf
thanks for the chapter boss, you've been developing this story splendidly so far, the only thing I can think of to help would be maybe considering posting chapter on Sat sun Tues and Thurs so u have more time to work on chapters and maybe make them longer. again though it's your choice and story so do what makes you feel comfortable.
ch 46 Chapter 46: ???
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
great chapter thanks boss
ch 45 Chapter 45: ???
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
thanks for the chap boss
ch 43 Chapter 43: Night attack
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
thanks for the chap boss, half asleep after work so can't give advice besides keep it up since English is hard rn lol
ch 42 Chapter 42: Traveling
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
I'd say catch up to the group and see if you can change anything else about the plot line, but if you don't want to that then you could send him a big game/fictional world like destiny or dc/marvel for instance that way you have a bigger plot line to follow which could give you a bigger arc for the Mc in said worlds, or keep with a few more shorter worlds to build his strength up before doing said bigger titles
ch 41 Chapter 41: Slaying the black smoke
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
I will agree that interactions between characters isn't all that much compared to other stories, but I'm guessing this is only one of your first few attempts at actually writing a full story, so just keep going at your own pace and experiment with different writing styles till you feel comfortable, the more you write the more experience you will get which will improve your quality. your starting off great already. keep up the good work
ch 40 Chapter 40: Riot?
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
the fight scenes so far are just at the level of description to spark the imagination but overly so that it becomes to long and chunky, so honestly your doing a great job so far seeing as I started this today and I absolutely love it.
How is the fight scenes? mid? Amazing? comment what you think but please be gentle im very sensitive.
Others 路 chaoticCatholic
it's a great story and it has developed a lot since I first started reading it. definitely think others should give it a read.
Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System
War 路 Lee_Kah