Even if this is a pretty bad story, you need to get the fúck out of here with those editors notes. Your thoughts are not important nor interesting. All they do is break the little immersion there is.
( E/N: No Kenichi don't fall for those sweet words, that's just a rich person doing charity work, talking. )
Anime & Comics · Charlottes
Lots of them don't, so not really.
The girl nodded and asked, "Do you practice any martial arts by any chance?"
Anime & Comics · Disappoinment
My condolences.
Like half the stuff you correct to is just straight up wrong
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Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
Dialogue tags for thoughts is the worst
Alex thought, "How did I suddenly become unconscious without feeling any pain? The thought alone of it scares me. No, keep calm. You are now too deep into this to change anything. I should rather think about how I can work out an advantage in the test."
Anime & Comics · alex02373
Everything about it is a bad idea. Not only does it post some people's real names online and associate it with your low quality erotic fiction—did you ask everyone if they were fine with it?—it is insanely annoying to read and scroll past for your readers. Just because someone else does something does not automatically make it a good idea. This is an example of some clueless authors copying other clueless authors and starting a bad trend. I also don't see it attracting more subs for your pátreon, as was probably your original intent anyway. Just don't do it.
ch 86 Chapter 84. Unusual
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
Ah yeah, the common Finnish name "Ah Ji". Come on man.
ch 67 The Mannerheim Line Welcomes You IX
48 Hours a Day
Sci-fi · Little Bleary Zhao