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New budding author that absolutely loves to read!

2020-04-16 Joined United States

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Not any more rofl!

"What's wrong? Is there something on my face?" Xiao Ze touched his cheek, finding it as clean as ever.

Btth: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback

Btth: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback

Anime & Comics · Johanssen10

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Scum of the earth!

A prime example was a 22-year-old guy who ran over a 20-year-old mother and her 3-year-old daughter, killing them both in the process while drunk racing. Yet, because he was very attractive, there was a protest by several women and some men wanting him to be released, because, in their words, he was too beautiful to go to jail.

DxD Multiverse: My Dating Sim System

DxD Multiverse: My Dating Sim System

Anime & Comics · Tozoku

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Just pointing out there are multiple spelling errors here.

In his embrace was a sleeping Ais, who, after defeating Barol yesterday and completing two quests, had returned to Orlare with Ais and Fenn. They arrived late at night and slept through until morning.

Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?

Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?

Anime & Comics · XElenea

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Jesus man you literaly have 2 of the trifecta systems all you missing is the gamer why you crying

Honestly, I was hoping for some powers that could help me... and I got a hemorrhoid ointment and a chat group.

DC: Dimensional Luck

DC: Dimensional Luck

Anime & Comics · Sothisq

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I have only done that if it’s blatant and reaccuring other wise I post a simple correction not to be an donkey but to be helpful

Most fanfic authors want to please their readers and write to the whims of the readers. But because of that, their fanfic becomes chaotic since not all readers are of the same mind. Like those who gave me powerstones, they like my fanfic and want more of it. But there are other readers who just read this to pass time and so, when they find a mistake, they demand the author to fix it.

Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System

Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System

Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday

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O I understand I tryed and it went nowhere after the third chapter I hit major writers block it sucke still can’t figure out how to proceed.

Psh! As if it was that easy to write. It's easy to read since even kids can do it, but write, bruh I won't tell you to write a fanfic or anything, but don't just assume it's that easy.

Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System

Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System

Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday

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I’m having no problems with the pace tho I would like a bit of action but meh you doing fine and I love to see authors with backbone they keep writing longer. So you do you and I’ll be here reading it!

Second of all, I got a comment from a reader who mentioned that this novel is slow and becoming filler-like (From his words, I'm more on telling and not showing) {If he is reading this, then meh, I don't care}.

Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System

Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System

Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday

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WTH why is it censored here and no where else I’m very confused?

Felicia felt weak; she forgot her own rules, forgot the consequences of getting too close to Allen. However, her mind was numb, and she couldn't think of anything other than pushing Allen into a bathroom to have ***.

I Stream DC on Marvel

I Stream DC on Marvel

Anime & Comics · Mr_Aizen

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(Yes, readers are killing me about some fan service, go on boy. Make papa proud)

HP: Magic Punk

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

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And so much more if she retains all 3 grails.

I want at least one healer in Mc's peerage, probably one worth two pawn pieces.

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

Anime & Comics · Pastlives

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There were only a few days until Raven's 18th birthday. Trigon was going to see if he couldn't soften his daughter up before the events of that day went into motion. Yes, nothing could go wrong with two of his plans combined. It was perfect! After all, Trigon was nothing if not an optimist in the most twisted sense of the word…

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Anime & Comics · Daddy

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And then Trigon met Mr barkeep heh let’s see what adventures happen next!

There were only a few days until Raven's 18th birthday. Trigon was going to see if he couldn't soften his daughter up before the events of that day went into motion. Yes, nothing could go wrong with two of his plans combined. It was perfect! After all, Trigon was nothing if not an optimist in the most twisted sense of the word…

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Anime & Comics · Daddy

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I’d be surprised if the author even listens.

Voldemort is no different. Sooner or later he will see the back slash of dark magic. 

HP: Magic Punk

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

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Ok well we the people demand double post then much hahaha

[AN: Sorry for the late chapter today. I forgot to post earlier :/]

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Anime & Comics · Daddy

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Dude it is Slughorn.

Potion masters like Snape and Slug Greenhorn watched intently, they too wanted a sample to test, but seeing the limited potion bottle and the drastically reduced purchasing power of British pure-blood thanks of one greedy mother*cker. They kept quiet, not like they can do anything else.

HP: Magic Punk

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

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Puddle

"Thank you, Harry, for taking me flying with you. It was so much fun...after I got over the initial fear of being a splash spot on the ground." she said, kissing his cheek and hugging him.

HP: The Magical Gamer

HP: The Magical Gamer

Book&Literature · Kitamari

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