Working on novels :)
2019-07-16 Joined Ascension Island
The test is to kill your girlfriend Sophie in cold blood.
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Max kept chatting and absentmindedly shoveling dirt, unaware of the fact that one of the three pieces of his destiny that the angel Hazriel had shown him in the vision, laid right beneath him at this moment.
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Yea theres 0 depth to her rn
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Games · Hamapo
No inspection of the property? Didnt even look at the financial model of the business?
Theo took the contract and they went to meet a lawyer to make things official. After busing himself all morning with the contract.
Urban · StarryForestJaguar
This doesnt make sense, he has had a good atitude for the last 18 chaps. Throwing this in so quickly just makes it seem like ur scrambling for some type of conflict
"I don't care! If I ordered you to heal me, then you have to heal me," Shay asserted with a furious look on his face.
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
Please use past tense!!!!
With his new gear, Cain is getting quite confident in his chances of making big money today in the second dungeon. He didn't really want to share the loot with anyone, so he plans to try the first run alone. After all, at level 10 he got a third golem from his [Summon Lesser Golem] spell.
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Really cliche sl far. Already forgetting the main plot is that the MC idles and becomes op.
Looking at the pitiful state of the Princess. She couldn't help as her maternal instincts rang out.
Games · Adui
They arent even out of highschool, and have never hung out outside of school. Its not love, its an obsession
"I dare you to say another word about her."
Fantasy · Awespec
I feel like the MC is going to end up being an emotional baby
ch 17 Abilities
Fantasy · Awespec
Why does he start feeling pity now? I feel like this is just dumb
ch 12 Mayan Temple (4)
Fantasy · Awespec
Hes gone 3 days without sleep and is injured. I think the spaniard would win.
However, this wasn't an anime. No matter how good a mortal swordsman was, there was a limit to how well they could respond to wild movements, especially when their attacker was so much stronger than them.
Fantasy · Awespec
Wasnt he searchibg for mei mei 😂😂
ch 37 Chapter 37: Meeting Her
Eastern · KevinAscending
I thought the point of the novel was that he did everything he wanted?
ch 33 Chapter 33: Will, Void, & Weapon
Eastern · KevinAscending
Please dont turn him into a hero, i started reading because the bio said he was ruthless
ch 28 Chapter 28: Thieves & Chase
Eastern · KevinAscending
Sounds a lot like Guild Wars especially with the server wide announcements.
ch 0 5 Necromancer's Hideout
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
She must want money... Right?
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Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
Praise be to The Fool!
ch 46 Ritualistic Magic
Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving