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The concept is interesting but I suggest that; this story needs to proofread it's kinda hurt to the brain that some extra words are not needed in their sentences or incomplete sentences to read

The mc in this novel is no good; can't even think by himself and the plot armor is so freaking thick. I must say that the mc is a two-faced biatch damn are you even a man? All the ladies you got it's either they force you or recommended by your harem members, also admit that you are not still satisfied with your harem members. Last but not the least I suggest to the author that add some spice in "cultivation session" and I also suggest that make the mc wear a green hat, the best candidate of it is yiren so the mc will feel the pleasure by another man damn if Kiba can teleport in this novel I'm freaking sure that the mc will be a GOOD HUSBAND. Seriously the author needs to add a rival of mc because the mc didn't grow all the achievements he got are from external forces, it's like a p2w player bullying the f2p.