This is an interesting novel but the entire novel is very visibly dependent on plot armors and metric f**k ton amout at that... Wouldhave been better if you could give him powers prior so he could recover and or counter attack without always depending on plot armor.... You are so keen on using plot armor but want to keep it real when it comes to him savaging items from his golden finger/system? Be less hypocritical, author yeah? Anyway except for these part, the story itself is interesting, i will give you that
ch 67 Chapter 67: Ambush
Anime & Comics · Abyssuit
All these done by an 11 yr old? 18 or more would have been better, the age and his actions are not compatible... Just imagine your 11 yr old kid playing like a normal child, then one day he goes to sleep and the next day he wakes up and says he wants to make a movie and has the script and drawings and everything, some days later he says he has music scores for the movie as well?? Super not making any sense and unbelievable, people might as well think that he is possessed or something... Saw many comments saying dont bring logic to fan fiction, but i disagree... Everything has logic whether you like it or not, fantasy or otherwise or else anyone can write a logicless fanfiction of chapter 1- Earthling transmigrated to Harry potter world, chapter 2- Defeated Voldermort (no logic fanfiction ri8?) chapter 3- The End... I dont think anyone would even bother commenting on such a stupid logicless Harry potter fanfic. Dont you think?
ch 0 5 Finishing the Lion King
Movies · thelightedghost
Rick does all the actions original to canon with no difference except for a living breathing human beside him, 1 year in soltitude for MC where he only trained and 1st time seeing Rick,the main character(probably why he choose the walking dead world) and except for one or two sentence dialogue, there is nothing else? Whats up with completely ignoring the butterfly effect of MCs sheer existence and MC being showcased as cheap emotionless pixel character? No pixel characters atleast show emojis... Not liking how this story is being written with only some modification to canon series... But its only in initial phase, so will continue
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 Meeting Rick
TV · R00t
So he lost consciousness AGAIN? Thats pretty lame
ch 13 My hero? And where am I? (Redone)
Anime & Comics · Abadom
Dont worry man, he probably has no way of saying how he got the money since he would need to show his 2nd level citizen identity and by link he may have to expose his feat of creating evo path that is so popular and may induce unwanted and malicious attraction... All in time but I do support your claim of giving his family security
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*taking revenge
My Cultivation Prowess Peaks after I Buried the Great Emperor's Corpse
Eastern · Green Mountain Demon