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What's GOH

How do you know? Did she post something

Is this dropped?

I'm dying for a new chapter

I love this story but it for a while it is like reading someone's journal than actully reading a story it's not like I don't like his experiments and spell crafting but now the interactions between characters became rare and when it does it's not satisfying I loved when alex and his friend went to the forest to free the vampire I their interactions but the dialouges are rare like it mostly monoluges and when there is does happen it's like short and unevantful this chapter had the most interactions on a long time and I really liked it you could change pov to his uncle show his dealing or his friends or you could show his sisters at home expand your world because a story is more than just the mc cooped up studing it's becoming just like those cultivation novelsand now is the most crucial because we already know what happens in the books that's my honest opinion I love your story but you have fallen into tell not show mistake many writers fall into. But still I'm exicted for the next chapter