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ch 13 Shocking News!
I Am The Anti-Mage
Fantasy · Phantomfiend
The names here are also weard the last names are mostly good.
(Worldwide news! Apex-rank hunter, Fizldir Lambert, found dead this morning far away from Paris city. And aside from Mister Fizldir, there are three S-rank hunters whose bodies are at the location too. Mr. Vitas Fournier, Mr. Tihalt Garcia, and Mr. Maxime Morel.)
I Am The Anti-Mage
Fantasy · Phantomfiend
Don't like the mixing of language here for the attacks make them in englisch please. Easier to understand and nod as likely to make mistakes. (Le gaz sword = the gas sword : gaz sword = gas sword, aux feux explosion = on fire explosion : fire explosion, Eaux Thunder = water Thunder : Glace thunder = Ice thunder)
"Magic of Wind, Legaz Sword!" A streak of wind blew over the hand and formed a thousand wind swords in the air. The thousand wind swords then shot towards the big man.
I Am The Anti-Mage
Fantasy · Phantomfiend
France pride and dignity, with a name like Fizldir 😂 should probably sound French, a "European" name like David, Elia, Samuel would be less hard to read
"France pride and dignity, Fizldir Lambert. And the three of them seem like the remnant from the famous The Guardian of Gaul."
I Am The Anti-Mage
Fantasy · Phantomfiend
Don't like the grammar here. ..., hearing Mon Seigneurs decision would be better
The three of them lowered their heads and went silent, hearing the Mon Seigneur decision.
I Am The Anti-Mage
Fantasy · Phantomfiend
Like that other languages are used. "Gnädiger Herr,..." would be more correct
"Der gnadiger Herr, It's rude to do this to your guest."
I Am The Anti-Mage
Fantasy · Phantomfiend
Sorry on writing the same again haven't seen your comment before
"Der gnadiger Herr, It's rude to do this to your guest."
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Fantasy · Phantomfiend